Question

10．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文．文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（/）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
       2．只允許修改10處，多著（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
Last month we took a trip to Dalian because of my brother was getting married．When mom told me the news，she found that I wasn't exciting．So the next words out of her mouth was，"Besides go to the wedding，we would also be going to the Wild Animal Park"，I thought the wedding was boring，so it turned out to be very interesting．There was so many food and their choice in music was pleasant．I enjoy myself there and I really didn't want to leave．Back home that night I wrote thank-you note to my brother for the great time we have at her wedding．

Answer 1

分析 本文講述了作者參加哥哥婚禮的過(guò)程．上個(gè)月我們?nèi)ゴ筮B參加哥哥的婚禮，媽媽看我不感興趣，就說(shuō)我們還會(huì)去野生動(dòng)物園．我本認(rèn)為婚禮很無(wú)聊，結(jié)果證明婚禮很有趣，食物美味，音樂(lè)優(yōu)美，我都不想要離開(kāi)了．回來(lái)后我給哥哥寫(xiě)了感謝信．

解答 Last month we took a trip to Dalian because of my brother was getting married．When mom told me the news，she found that I wasn't exciting．So the next words out of her mouth was，"Besides go to the wedding，we would also be going to the Wild Animal Park"，I thought the wedding was boring，so it turned out to be very interesting．There was so many food and their choice in music was pleasant．I enjoy myself there and I really did't want to leave．Back home that night I wrote thank-you note to my brother for the great time we have at her wedding．
解析：
1、去掉of．引導(dǎo)從句my brother was getting married用連詞 because．
2、exciting-excited．考查單詞辨析．修飾主語(yǔ)I用excited，表示"興奮的"．
3、was-were．考查主謂一致關(guān)系．和主語(yǔ) the next words呼應(yīng)用were．
4、go-going．考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞．介詞Besides的賓語(yǔ)用動(dòng)名詞doing，所以用going．
5、be going-go．考查謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞．情態(tài)動(dòng)詞would用動(dòng)詞原形，所以用would go．
6、so-but．考查連詞．I thought the wedding was boring表示"我本認(rèn)為婚禮很無(wú)聊"，it turned out to be very interesting表示"結(jié)果證明婚禮很有趣"，兩句之間是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，所以用but連接．
7、many-much．考查不可數(shù)名詞的修飾詞．修飾不可數(shù)名詞food用much．
8、enjoy-enjoyed．考查謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)．本文講述的是過(guò)去的事，所以謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用過(guò)去式enjoyed．
9、have-had．考查謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)．本文講述的是過(guò)去的事，所以謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用過(guò)去式had．
10、her-his．考查代詞．和my brother 呼應(yīng)用his．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查短文改錯(cuò)．
修飾不可數(shù)名詞的常用修飾語(yǔ)有this，that，little，a little，a bit of，much，a great deal of，a large amount of 等：
I have little time to do it．我沒(méi)什么時(shí)間來(lái)做此事．
He didn't give me much money．他沒(méi)給我很多錢．
A great deal of money is spent on research．研究工作上花了許多錢．