Question

【題目】隨著近年來城市發(fā)展速度的加快,很多反映城市歷史風貌的古建筑屢遭破壞。就這個問題請你以"How to Protect the Ancient Buildings"為題向報社寫一封建議信。

要點如下:

1.很多古建筑被拆;

2.呼吁拯救這些古建筑;

3.希望有合理的解決方法。

注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;

可適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。

Answer 1

【答案】

In recent years, as the city develops faster and faster, many old and historic buildings are being damaged by people. They want to make room for housing or offices in urban construction. Do you think we should try to protect those old buildings or replace them with the modern ones?

I think we should take measures to protect those ancient buildings, because they reflect the history and culture of the city. And the young will learn a lot when they visit the historical relic sites. The government and related departments should find a suitable solution to these problems. As a citizen, it is my and everyone’s duty to spare no efforts to take any way to protect the historical property.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達屬于議論文格式，根據(jù)提示信息和要求來寫作。寫作時注意以下幾點：：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確要點。2、依據(jù)提示信息或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。3、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言適用一般現(xiàn)在時。 4、注意變換句式，增加高級詞匯與短語，以突出文章亮點。

【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。如比較級的使用：as the city develops faster and faster, many old and historic buildings are being damaged by people；如原因狀語的使用：I think we should take measures to protect those ancient buildings, because they reflect the history and culture of the city；此外，文中還使用了大量的短語，如 make room for， take measures to，a solution to， spare no efforts to， take any way to，the historical relic sites等等，使得文章地道，彰顯筆者水平。