【題目】假定你是李華，你在上周日搭坐102號(hào)公交車，該公交車司機(jī)的不文明行為讓乘客很憤怒。于是你向公交車公司寫一封投訴信。要點(diǎn)如下：

1. 司機(jī)的不文明行為(大聲講話、緊急剎車、態(tài)度粗魯?shù)?/span>)。

2. 希望盡快查清此事。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右。2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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【答案】Dear Sir,

I am Li Hua. I am writing to complain about one of your bus-drivers’ improper and rude behaviors.

Last Sunday, I was taking the No. 102 bus whose driver not only kept on talking with a man loudly but also drove very fast. So some passengers advised him to concentrate on driving, but he didn’t pay any attention. What’s worse, he drove even faster. Then another passenger couldn’t bear it, asking the driver to keep the passengers’ safety in mind. But the driver stopped the bus so suddenly that all the passengers nearly lost their balance. However, he didn’t apologize but said rudely “It’s none of your business.”[

I sincerely hope you can investigate this incident and proper measures should be taken to prevent such an incident happening again.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【解析】這是一篇命題作文。文章內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出。同學(xué)們?cè)趯戇@篇文章時(shí)，要注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1. 通篇以一般將來(lái)時(shí)為主。2. 要點(diǎn)要齊全。但是不要對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單的羅列。可以使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，使上下文行文流暢，銜接自然流程。3. 注意語(yǔ)氣。要注意語(yǔ)氣應(yīng)該比較懇切。難點(diǎn)是計(jì)劃，一定要通過(guò)簡(jiǎn)單的例子作為支撐。否則會(huì)顯得說(shuō)服力不夠，內(nèi)容不夠豐滿。寫這部分內(nèi)容時(shí)，學(xué)生可以采取簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)合句結(jié)合的方法。

【范文亮點(diǎn)】：

文章開頭先進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)要的自我介紹并說(shuō)明來(lái)信意圖，引出話題，簡(jiǎn)明扼要。第二段對(duì)事件的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、過(guò)程進(jìn)行詳細(xì)的說(shuō)明。并采用高級(jí)句型（“Last Sunday, I was taking the No. 102 bus whose driver not only kept on talking with a man loudly but also drove very fast.”限制性定語(yǔ)從句）以及固定句式（“he didn’t apologize but said rudely”。not...but...不是……而是……）。也運(yùn)用了complain about、What’s worse、However、sincerely等高級(jí)單詞和短語(yǔ)讓文章看起來(lái)更有料。文章結(jié)尾提出意見(jiàn)語(yǔ)氣懇切。

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