Question

當(dāng)今社會(huì)人們的心理問(wèn)題越來(lái)越引人關(guān)注。以下是我校高二級(jí)學(xué)生在心理健康的研究學(xué)習(xí)中做的結(jié)題報(bào)告提綱。請(qǐng)據(jù)此寫(xiě)一篇英文版的心理健康問(wèn)題結(jié)題報(bào)告。

現(xiàn)狀	每四個(gè)人就有一個(gè)一生中會(huì)有心理健康問(wèn)題，它會(huì)導(dǎo)致各種疾病。
原因	成年人：工作壓力、子女教育；學(xué)生：學(xué)習(xí)壓力。
解決辦法	找到問(wèn)題根源；放松自己，如參加運(yùn)動(dòng)、娛樂(lè)活動(dòng)、交友；咨詢心理醫(yī)生。

【寫(xiě)作要求】
1. 語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫。
2. 詞數(shù)120左右。
3. 參考詞匯：心理健康問(wèn)題 psychological problem

Answer 1

One in four people will experience some kind of psychological problem during his or her life. When they fail to deal with these problems, they are likely to lead to various illnesses.
The causes of mental health problems often vary greatly. Nowadays, a good number of people in the society are suffering from heavy pressure. Most adults’ pressure is due to the stress of work or the worry about their children’s education while many adolescents are also troubled by the pressure coming from their study.
Fortunately, there’re a lot of ways to cure the mental problems. Firstly, find the real cause of your psychological problem and see whether you can solve it thoroughly. Secondly, do something to relax yourself, such as having sports, taking part in some entertainments or making some friends. Finally, do not hesitate to turn to your psychological consultant if you find all the above methods not effective.

試題分析：考查提綱類(lèi)書(shū)面表達(dá)的寫(xiě)作。要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于心理健康問(wèn)題的結(jié)題報(bào)告，要點(diǎn)包括：現(xiàn)狀，原因，解決辦法，具體內(nèi)容表格中都已經(jīng)給出來(lái)了，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要把要點(diǎn)都包括進(jìn)去，不要有遺漏，審題時(shí)注意本文使用的時(shí)態(tài)，運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用省略句，倒裝句和強(qiáng)調(diào)句型準(zhǔn)確表述。如范文里面的Most adults’ pressure is due to the stress of work or the worry about their children’s education while many adolescents are also troubled by the pressure coming from their study.還有要用適當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞把文章串聯(lián)起來(lái)：Fortunately, Firstly, Secondly, Finally,等等。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：提綱類(lèi)短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，詞匯句型的選用，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語(yǔ)法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。