【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及二個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處,多者從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Apologizing can be harder than realizing you've acted poor. To truly apologize for a friend, you had to be sincere and admit your mistakes. And let your friend to know how much he or she means to you. This may be easy said than done, but if they hide your feeling of pride, and show some real regret, you'll have a tree apology ready. If possible, always apologize personally. Sending flowers or gifts is free, and flowers aren't giving informations "I'm sorry." You are just hiding behind gifts. So it is of great important to apologize personally. This will make your friends more willing to accept apology.

【答案】1.poor改為poorly

2.for改為to

3.had改為have

4.去掉to

5.easy改為easier

6.they改為you

7.a(chǎn)nd改為but或yet

8.informations改為information

9.important改為importance

10.在accept和apology間增加the或your

【解析】本文是一篇記敘文,作者主要講述為了真正向朋友道歉,你必須真誠地承認(rèn)自己的錯(cuò)誤。而親自道歉是非常重要的。這會(huì)讓你的朋友更愿意接受道歉。

1、“Apologizing can be harder than realizing you've acted poor. ”poor修飾動(dòng)詞acted, 故應(yīng)使用副詞poorly。

2、“To truly apologize for a friend”這里應(yīng)將for改成to,對朋友真誠地道歉。向某人道歉“make apologize to somebody”。

3、“you had to be sincere and admit your mistakes. ”全篇文章用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),故將had改成have。

4、“l(fā)et your friend to know how much he or she means to you”let sb. do sth.讓某人做某事,故將to去掉。

5、“ This may be easy said than done”,由than可知本句使用比較級,說起來容易,做起來難。故將easy改成easier。

6、“but if they hide your feeling of pride”,由整篇文章的人稱代詞以及your feeling可知,此處應(yīng)將they改成you。

7、“ Sending flowers or gifts is free, and flowers aren't giving informations "I'm sorry." ”前半句與后半句是轉(zhuǎn)折的關(guān)系,故將and改為but(但是)或是yet。

8、“ flowers aren't giving informations ”information為不可數(shù)名詞,不能加s,故將informations改為information。

9、“is of great important”,詞組“be of great importance”...有極大的重要性。故將形容詞important改為名詞importance。

10、“This will make your friends more willing to accept apology.”在apology前面應(yīng)加上the定冠詞或者your,來修飾限定名詞apology。

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