Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你收到外國朋友Peter的郵件，他想了解你校在新冠疫情（COVID-19epidemic）期間線上教學(xué)的情況。請你給他回復(fù)郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 課程與時間；

2. 你的學(xué)習狀態(tài)；

3. 你的期待。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter:

I’m so glad to hear from you and know about you are doing these days. I’m writing to tell you how our schooling is now going on.

Actually, we are having e-learning at home, studying in the “classroom in the air” all the academic and non-academic subjects. The holiday schedule runs from 8:00 am till 4:30 pm on work day, with more and longer breaks for rest than usual.

Personally, I’ve got used to online learning, which I think is a creative from of schooling, and also our own way to fight the COVID-19 epidemic. We’ve come to realize how important computers and mobile phones have become to us! But I really miss the days with my friends and teachers on campus. That’s why I pray for the end of the epidemic every day, and I believe it’ll soon come.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，回復(fù)外國朋友Peter關(guān)于學(xué)校在新冠疫情（COVID-19epidemic）期間線上教學(xué)的情況。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

人稱：第一人稱為主

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時

結(jié)構(gòu)：總-分-總法

要點：

1. 課程與時間；

2. 你的學(xué)習狀態(tài)；

3. 你的期待。

第二步：列提綱 （重點詞組）

hear from；go on；at home；get used to；online learning；COVID-19 epidemic；come to realize；mobile phones；on campus；the end of等

第三步：連詞成句

1. I’m so glad to hear from you and know about you are doing these days.

2. I’m writing to tell you how our schooling is now going on.

3. We are having e-learning at home, studying in the “classroom in the air” all the academic and non-academic subjects.

4. The holiday schedule runs from 8:00 am till 4:30 pm on work day, with more and longer breaks for rest than usual.

5. I’ve got used to online learning, which I think is a creative from of schooling, and also our own way to fight the COVID-19 epidemic.

6. We’ve come to realize how important computers and mobile phones have become to us!

7. That’s why I pray for the end of the epidemic every day, and I believe it’ll soon come.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

Actually；Personally；But；and；also；so等

連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。

第五步：潤色修改