Question

假如你是李華，你的美國(guó)筆友Julia 來(lái)信告訴你她想和幾個(gè)同學(xué)開(kāi)一家網(wǎng)上書店，并想征求你的意見(jiàn)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給Julia 寫一封回信。
表示贊成并說(shuō)明好處：可以學(xué)會(huì)理財(cái)、加強(qiáng)與人溝通、自己看書更方便等；
分析劣勢(shì)：占用較多時(shí)間、經(jīng)驗(yàn)不足、對(duì)市場(chǎng)不了解等；
提出建議。
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)：100左右；
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫；
3. 開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Julia,
I was very happy to receive your letter telling me about your plan of opening an online bookstore with some classmates. _________________________________________________
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Yours，
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Julia,
I was very happy to receive your letter telling me about your plan of opening an online bookstore with some classmates.
It would be a great idea because you can learn how to manage money and how to communicate with others effectively. Besides, it will be easier for you to read new books so that you can learn more. However, opening an online bookstore will take up a lot of your spare time. Apart from this, you have little experience in the field and if you don’t know what books are in demand, you may lose some money.
I think you should do some research first and learn how to run an online bookstore. What’s more, you’d better do the business during holidays. I am looking forward to hearing from you again.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua

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