14．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文．文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉．
刪除：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
Today is my birthday and I'm so excited about it．In the morning I left a note on the table from my mum and it said，"Today is my birthday．Don't forget it!"
When it was time to leave school I couldn't wait to go home．When I open the door，there wasn't anybody in the house．There was only a note saying，：We can't go home early tonight，Mum and Dad．"I was so sadly that I couldn't eat anything．I just did my homework but waited for them．
And then，things was changed completely．It was about time for dinner，my mother called and told me to go to the restaurant near our house．When I got there I couldn't believed my eye．Everybody was there：my parents，my relatives，my friends and even my classmates．There was so many gifts and a big cake．How a surprising birthday party!We had a good time and it was the best birthday party ever．

分析 今天是我的生日，一大早我就給媽媽留了個(gè)便條提醒她．放學(xué)時(shí)我迫不及待地跑回家，卻發(fā)現(xiàn)家里沒(méi)有人，只有一個(gè)便條寫(xiě)著：我們今天會(huì)回來(lái)很晚．爸媽?zhuān)吹竭@我非常傷心，什么東西都不想吃，只是寫(xiě)著作業(yè)等他們．就在這時(shí)事情完全有了變化，到了晚飯時(shí)間媽媽打電話(huà)要我去附近的飯店．當(dāng)我到了那里，我?guī)缀醪荒芟嘈盼业难劬�，我的父母，親戚，朋友甚至同學(xué)都在這里，這里有很多禮物和一個(gè)大蛋糕．這是一個(gè)多么令人吃驚的生日晚會(huì)！

解答 Today is my birthday and I'm so excited about it．In the morning I left a note on the table from my mum and it said，"Today is my birthday．Don't forget it!"
When it was time to leave school I couldn't wait to go home．When I open the door，there wasn't anybody in the house．There was only a note saying，：We can't go home early tonight，Mum and Dad．"I was so sadly that I couldn't eat anything．I just did my homework butwaited for them．
And then，things was changed completely．It was about time for dinner，my mother called and told me to go to the restaurant near our house．When I got there I couldn't believed my eye．Everybody was there：my parents，my relatives，my friends and even my classmates．There was so many gifts and a big cake．How a surprising birthday party!We had a good time and it was the best birthday party  ever．
詳解：
1．from改為for；考查介詞，分析句意應(yīng)為"我在桌子上給媽媽留了個(gè)便條"，這里用介詞for表示目的．
2．open改為opened；考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)，分析上下文可知open這個(gè)動(dòng)作發(fā)生在過(guò)去，故用一般過(guò)去時(shí)．
3．sadly改為sad；考查形容詞，這里用形容詞作系動(dòng)詞was的表語(yǔ)．
4．but改為and；考查連詞，結(jié)合語(yǔ)境分析句意為"我只有寫(xiě)著作業(yè)等他們"可知此處沒(méi)有轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，而是并列關(guān)系，所以用and．
5．And改為But；考查連詞，分析上下文，前面講到父母都不在家，"我"非常難過(guò)，后面一轉(zhuǎn)講到"事情完全發(fā)生了變化"，所以這應(yīng)當(dāng)是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故用but，but then意為"然而"．
6．去掉was；考查動(dòng)詞的語(yǔ)態(tài)，分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，主語(yǔ)things 是動(dòng)詞change 的使用者，要用主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，故去掉was．
7．believed改為believe；考查動(dòng)詞，情態(tài)動(dòng)詞could后面要跟動(dòng)詞原形，故用believe．
8．eye改為eyes；考查名詞的復(fù)數(shù)，分析句意應(yīng)為"我不敢相信我的雙眼"，故應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)eyes．
9．was改為were；考查就近一致原則，在there be 結(jié)構(gòu)中，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞與后面第一個(gè)主語(yǔ)保持一致，即這里與 so many gifts 保持一致，故用復(fù)數(shù)were．
10．How 改為What；考查感嘆句，感嘆句有what引導(dǎo)和how引導(dǎo)兩種形式，how后面跟形容詞或副詞，what后面跟名詞，這里a surprising birthday party是名詞性短語(yǔ)，所以前面要用what引導(dǎo)．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)時(shí)要先通讀全文，整體理解短文的基本大意，然后分析句子間的結(jié)構(gòu)關(guān)系，運(yùn)用所掌握的基本語(yǔ)言知識(shí)從細(xì)節(jié)上加以分析，找出文中的錯(cuò)誤并加以改正．

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