Question

【題目】請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀下文信息，并按照要求用英語(yǔ)寫一篇150詞左右的文章。

China’s New Wildlife Trade Ban and Upcoming Law Amendment（修正案）

March 05, 2020 “Lisa” Ning Hua

The Coronavirus Outbreak in China, has been identified by the World Health Organization as a “Public Health Emergency of International Concern” or “PHEIC.” Seventeen years after the horrific SARS outbreak, the coronavirus has once again shown a spotlight on the risks of consuming wildlife as food and encouraged public outcry to ban wild meat consumption in China.

This challenge is not unique to China. Epidemics, such as Ebola, Middle East Respiratory Syndrome, Bovine Spongiform Encephalopathy or Mad Cow Disease, Avian Influenza, and SARS, all originate from wildlife.

To combat the outbreak, China announced a suspension on wildlife trade across the country in January and a crackdown (i.e., stricter enforcement) on illegal activities involving wildlife. The country’s top legislature also initiated a process for amending the current Wildlife Protection Law and announcing a decision this week to ban the trade of wildlife as food and tighten the crackdown on illegal wildlife trade.

While this is all very good news, it should be noted that the ban is not permanent and will automatically expire（失效）when the amendments to the Wildlife Protection Law become effective. Further, key details regarding ban enforcement have yet to be clarified to ensure it serves its purpose.

（寫作內(nèi)容）

1. 用約30個(gè)單詞概述上述信息的主要內(nèi)容；

2. 談?wù)勀闳绾慰创�保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物，并說明理由（至少兩點(diǎn)）。

（寫作要求）

1. 寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語(yǔ)句；

2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

3. 不必寫標(biāo)題。

（評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)）

內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。

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Answer 1

【答案】The outbreak of several serious epidemics has brought wildlife conservation back into the public eye. China has shown its determination to ban the consumption of wildlife as food and stricter law is on its way.

From my perspective, it’s urgent to protect wildlife. After all, the planet Earth exists not only for the benefit of humans, but also for various creatures. Every animal has its place in the biosphere, and we humans have no right to destroy it. By protecting wild animals and their habitats, we can maintain the natural balance of all life on Earth. What’s more, an increasing number of species are threatened with extinction largely due to violent killing for profits, which in turn endangers the living environment of humans, thus spelling disasters.

In conclusion, wildlife protection is critical to the reversal of biodiversity declines, and beneficial to human health as well. Not until we leave wildlife in peace can we smile in relief.

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于讀寫任務(wù)。要求學(xué)生歸納文章大意以及談?wù)勅绾慰创�保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物，并說明理由。

第一步：審題

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法。

要求：

1. 用約30個(gè)單詞概述上述信息的主要內(nèi)容；

2. 談?wù)勀闳绾慰创�保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物，并說明理由（至少兩點(diǎn)）。

第二步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)）

has shown its determination ；has its place ；maintain the natural balance；wildlife protection is critical to

第三步：連詞成句

1.China has shown its determination to ban the consumption of wildlife as food and stricter law is on its way.

2.Every animal has its place in the biosphere, and we humans have no right to destroy it.

3.By protecting wild animals and their habitats, we can maintain the natural balance of all life on Earth.

4.In conclusion, wildlife protection is critical to the reversal of biodiversity declines, and beneficial to human health as well.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇

1.表示文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：歸納上文；提出觀點(diǎn)；最后總結(jié)。

2.表示并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：From my perspective；What’s more；In conclusion

第五步：潤(rùn)色修改