Question

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Nuli told us what he wanted to be a scientist when he                                    1.       

was in his childhood.He worked hard at all his lesson                                           2.       

and tried to enter into a famous university in China,                                      3.       

but he failed because the Cultural Revolution,which                                      4.       

forced him to make a living at the age of 16.He serves                                  5.       

as a farmer then a worker,but he spent his spare                                            6.        

time studied and was finally admitted into a local college.                              7.       

He often says,“Young guys,do not lose the heart                                                  8.       

when you are in trouble.Believe in yourself forever,                                      9.       

so you will surely make great progress sooner or later.”                                 10.       

Answer 1

1.what改為that　

2.lesson改為lessons　

3.去掉into　

4.because后面加of　

5.serves改為served　

6.but改為and　

7.studied改為studying　

8.去掉the　

9.yourself改為yourselves　

10.so改為and　

解析:

1.what改為that　he wanted to be a scientist是賓語從句,句子成分完整,所以前面的這個連接詞應(yīng)該是that。what引導(dǎo)名詞性從句時,需要在從句中作主語、賓語、表語或定語。此題也可把what去掉。因?yàn)閠hat引導(dǎo)賓語從句時,可省略。

2.lesson改為lessons　根據(jù)前面的定語all his可知此處要用復(fù)數(shù)形式。

3.去掉into　enter是及物動詞,后面不需要介詞也可跟賓語。

4.because后面加of　這個原因狀語是一個名詞詞組,所以要用短語介詞because of。

5.serves改為served　這是敘述過去的事情。

6.but改為and　這一句話的前后是并列關(guān)系,并非轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。

7.studied改為studying　構(gòu)成spend time doing...句式。

8.去掉the　lose heart是習(xí)慣用語,heart是抽象名詞。

9.yourself改為yourselves　此句中的這個反身代詞指“young guys”。

10.so改為and　這是一個“祈使句+and+結(jié)果分句”句式。