Question

【題目】書面表達

中國人出國旅游的不文明行為越來越受到廣泛關注。請以表格中所列舉的事實為依據(jù)，寫一則英語短文，談談自己的看法。

不文明行為	你的看法
在公共場所： 隨地吐痰、亂丟垃圾、大聲喧嘩 ……	注意言談舉止、 愛護環(huán)境、維護中國人的形象 ……

注意：

1. 文章必須包括表格中的提示內(nèi)容，可以增加細節(jié)使行文連貫；

2. 詞數(shù)100左右；

3. 開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；

4. 參考詞匯：亂丟 (垃圾) litter；吐痰 spit；形象 image；聲譽 reputation

As more and more Chinese go traveling abroad, reports about their bad manners flood in.

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Answer 1

【答案】

As more and more Chinese go travelling abroad, reports about their bad manners flood in. Many overseas Chinese are embarrassed when foreigners ask them if all Chinese shout loudly, litter or spit everywhere. The poor behaviors of some Chinese have done great harm to our good reputation. Since China has become an important part of the global village, we really need to understand and respect foreign cultures, so as to get along well when travelling abroad. So before you start your next overseas trip, remember to learn about the culture and people there and mind your behaviors in public places, which aims to improve China's image in foreigners' eyes. What’s more, wherever you go you need to protect the environment. Only in this way can we win respect for ourselves and our country.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來. 動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。

【亮點說明】范文中運用一些常見的短語do harm to 對。。有害；so as to為了；aim to do 目的是；What’s more而且；So before you start your next overseas trip, remember to learn about the culture and people there and mind your behaviors in public places, which aims to improve China's image in foreigners' eyes這個句子which引導非限制性定語從句；Only in this way can we win respect for ourselves and our country這個句子運用到only+狀語+部分倒裝 ；