【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

Hi, Sarah，

It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.

As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out﹙玩耍﹚ together during lunch and after school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many money. And I started to see this as a timewasting activity! In fact，I don't like to go anymore, so I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me，would you talk to him?

Please help with me and give me some advice.

【答案】

【1】∧ to

【2】tell改成told

【3】friend 改成friends

【4】sing改成singing

【5】many 改成much

【6】so改成but

【7】how改成what

【8】are改成were

【9】him 改成them

【10】with去掉

【解析】

【1】∧ to 考查固定用法。want意為“想要”時(shí)后面必須接動(dòng)詞不定式作賓語(yǔ)，不能和動(dòng)詞原形連用。第一段：want后加to want to do為固定搭配，故在want后加to。加上to ，want用不定式擔(dān)當(dāng)狀語(yǔ)，故加上to。

【2】tell改成told 考查時(shí)態(tài)。 根據(jù)句子的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)last time可知謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞應(yīng)該用過(guò)去式。根據(jù)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)last time可知，本句時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般過(guò)去時(shí)，故將tell改為told。tell→told ，根據(jù)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)last time可知，此句需要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，故把tell改成told.

【3】friend 改成friends 考查名詞的復(fù)數(shù)。three后接可數(shù)復(fù)數(shù)名詞。句中three表示復(fù)數(shù)概念，后面的名詞應(yīng)為復(fù)數(shù)形式，故將friend改為friends。名詞friend為可數(shù)名詞，其前有three修飾，需要用復(fù)數(shù)形式，故把friend改成friends。

【4】sing改成singing 考查動(dòng)名詞擔(dān)當(dāng)賓語(yǔ)。spend sb+時(shí)間或錢+doing sth．花費(fèi)某人時(shí)間或錢做某事。spend some time(in)doing sth．為固定搭配，故將sing改為singing。本句考查句型spend（in）doing sth結(jié)構(gòu)，故把sing改成singing。

【5】many 改成much 考查代詞。 many表示可數(shù)概念或用來(lái)修飾復(fù)數(shù)可數(shù)名詞，但是此處cost的賓語(yǔ)應(yīng)該是錢，而錢是不可數(shù)的，所以應(yīng)該用much指代“很多錢”。表示消費(fèi)量，為不可數(shù)概念，而many為可數(shù)概念，故將many改為much。根據(jù)句意，指的是花費(fèi)很多錢，故用much而非many。

【6】so改成but 考查連詞。so意為“因此”，表結(jié)果，顯然不合邏輯， 高考短文改錯(cuò)真題解析It's been a month since I came to this new因此應(yīng)該用but表示前后兩部分是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。根據(jù)“我不想再去了”和“我害怕失去他們的友誼”可知，此處應(yīng)為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故將so改為but。上一分句意為：我不想再去；下一分句意為：我怕失去他們的友誼，兩個(gè)分句之間有轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故把so改成but。

【7】how改成what 考查疑問(wèn)詞的選擇。 how不能作賓語(yǔ)，因此應(yīng)該改為what來(lái)作動(dòng)詞do的賓語(yǔ)。在此句中，特殊疑問(wèn)詞充當(dāng)?shù)诙䝼�(gè)do的賓語(yǔ)，故將How改為What。本句中do之后缺少賓語(yǔ)，表示事情，故用what而非how。注意首字母要大寫(xiě)。

【8】are改成were 考查虛擬語(yǔ)氣。 根據(jù)would you talk to him可知，本句是一個(gè)含有if條件句的虛擬語(yǔ)氣。表示與現(xiàn)在或?qū)?lái)事實(shí)相反時(shí)從句動(dòng)詞應(yīng)該用過(guò)去式。條件從句與現(xiàn)在事實(shí)相反，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞使用過(guò)去式，故將are改為were。根據(jù)句子可知，此處為虛擬語(yǔ)氣，與現(xiàn)在事實(shí)不相符，故把a(bǔ)re改成were。

【9】him 改成them 考查代詞。本題屬于代詞的指代不明。應(yīng)該將him改為them這樣才與前文的their一致，指代前文的朋友。第二段第八句：him→them根據(jù)上文可知，這里指作者的三個(gè)新朋友，此處代詞指代錯(cuò)誤，故將him改為them。

【10】with去掉 考查介詞。help為及物動(dòng)詞直接加賓語(yǔ) help為及物動(dòng)詞，與me構(gòu)成動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，因此，with在此處多余，故去掉with。

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