【題目】假定你是李華，暑假想去一家外貿(mào)公司兼職，已寫好申請書和個人簡歷（resume）。給外教Mr. Jenkins 寫信，請她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，已使行文連貫。

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【答案】

Dear Ms Jenkins,

I’m Li Hua from your English writing class last term. I’m writing to ask for your help.

I’m applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation, and I have just completed my application letter and resume. However, I’m not quite sure of the language and the format I have used. I know you have a very busy schedule, but I would be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes. Please find my application letter and the resume in the attachment.

Thank you for your kindness!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于應(yīng)用文寫作，話題已給出，寫作可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫，同時注意語句通順，同時要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運(yùn)用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右;2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，已使行文連貫。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】語言簡練，銜接緊密，層次分明，運(yùn)用高級句子。I’m applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation, and I have just completed my application letter and resume. and將兩個句子連接起來，盡顯章法； I’m not quite sure of the language and the format I have used. 使用定語從句；I know you have a very busy schedule, but I would be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes. 含賓語從句的復(fù)合句和含條件狀語從句的復(fù)合句用but連接起來；However, 在句中的使用恰到好處。

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