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【題目】假定你是李華，目前正處于高三階段。與你同為高三的好友李杰寫信向你征求如何為高考做準(zhǔn)備。你給他寫一封回信談?wù)劯呖紓淇嫉淖⒁馐马?xiàng)并陳述你的理由：

注意事項(xiàng)	理由
1. 保持良好的心態(tài) 2. 目標(biāo)明確 3. 與父母、老師或同學(xué)溝通 4. 作息合理，飲食均衡	1. 有助于減輕焦慮，還能增強(qiáng)克服困難的勇氣 2. 正確評價(jià)自己 3. …… 4. ……

注意： 1. 詞數(shù)100左右 ， 開頭已為你寫好（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；

2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)， 以使行文連貫。

3. 參考詞匯： 明確的 (definite) 評價(jià)(estimation)

Dear Li Jie ,

I have received your letter. No doubt every Senior 3 student wishes to be successful in the National College Entrance Examination. _____________

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Li Jie ,

I have received your letter. No doubt every Senior 3 student wishes to be successful in the National College Entrance Examination. Yet what should we do in order to achieve success? Here are some suggestions.

First, it’s vital to have a right attitude, for a normal state of mind and self-confidence not only helps us relax but also enables us to overcome difficulties bravely. Meanwhile, we should have a definite goal and a correct estimation of ourselves. Only in this way will we face everything in life more objectively. Besides, we’d better talk with our parents, teachers or classmates, who may help us out when we are in trouble. Finally, striking a good balance between study and rest keeps us energetic and a healthy diet is useful as well.

With these done, I think we can greatly improve our performance.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：假定你是李華，目前正處于高三階段。與你同為高三的好友李杰寫信向你征求如何為高考做準(zhǔn)備。你給他寫一封回信談?wù)劯呖紓淇嫉淖⒁馐马?xiàng)并陳述你的理由。注意事項(xiàng)：1.保持良好的心態(tài)；2.目標(biāo)明確；3.與父母、老師或同學(xué)溝通；4.作息合理，飲食均衡。理由：1.有助于減輕焦慮，還能增強(qiáng)克服困難的勇氣；2.正確評價(jià)自己；3. ……；4. ……。寫作時(shí)不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫同時(shí)要把所提示的點(diǎn)寫全，語句通順，同時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時(shí)也要合理運(yùn)用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。注意： 1. 詞數(shù)100左右 ， 開頭已為你寫好（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)， 以使行文連貫。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】采用三段式，語言簡練，布局合理，運(yùn)用高級句子。Yet what should we do in order to achieve success?動詞不定式表示目的狀語；First, it’s vital to have a right attitude, for a normal state of mind and self-confidence not only helps us relax but also enables us to overcome difficulties bravely.for在這里表示“原因”，引導(dǎo)并列句；Only in this way will we face everything in life more objectively.部分倒裝堪稱經(jīng)典：Besides, we’d better talk with our parents, teachers or classmates, who may help us out when we are in trouble.非限制性定語從句用于句中；Finally, striking a good balance between study and rest keeps us energetic and a healthy diet is useful as well.動詞不定式短語做主語；With these done,with的獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)；另外，F(xiàn)irst, Meanwhile, Besides, as well.為文章增色添彩。