Question

【題目】書面表達

目前出國旅游很熱門，假設(shè)你是某高中學生李華,你的朋友Lily計劃假期出國旅游，希望你能給予她一些建議。請你用英語寫一篇電子郵件回復她。

要點如下：

1.旅游中出現(xiàn)的一些不文明現(xiàn)象。

2.你的建議。

注意：1.詞數(shù)在100左右，

2.可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫；

3.參考詞匯：吐痰 spit；樹立形象 uphold an image

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear lily，

I am so glad to receive your letter lelling me you will go on an overseas trip , here are my suggestions.

As we know , with more and more Chinese going on overseas trips, some of them shout loudly , litter or spit in public , which has done great harm to our good reputation. Therefore , to begin with , you have to understand and respect foreign cultures , so as to get along well . And before you start your overseas trip , remember to learn about the culture and custom there . What’s more , wherever you go you need to protect the enviroment . In this way , you1’ll win respect for yourself as well as our country . Finally , you should always keep in mind that it is everyone’s responsibility to unhold image of our motherland.

I do wish you have a good time!

【解析】

試題分析：目前出國旅游很熱門，假設(shè)你是某高中學生李華,你的朋友Lily計劃假期出國旅游，希望你能給予她一些建議。請你用英語寫一篇電子郵件回復她。要點如下：1.旅游中出現(xiàn)的一些不文明現(xiàn)象。2.你的建議。寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫同時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。注意：1.詞數(shù)在100左右。

【亮點說明】I am so glad to receive your letter telling me you will go on an overseas trip在此句中現(xiàn)在分詞短語作定語；As we know , with more and more Chinese going on overseas trips, some of them shout loudly , litter or spit in public , which has done great harm to our good reputation. As引導的非限制性定語從句和which引導的非限制性定語從句在句中同時出現(xiàn)；Therefore , to begin with , you have to understand and respect foreign cultures , so as to get along well .動詞不定式短語做獨立成分和動詞不定式短語做目的狀語巧妙結(jié)合；And before you start your overseas trip , remember to learn about the culture and custom there .運用了時間狀語從句和祈使句；What’s more , wherever you go you need to protect the enviroment . wherever引導讓步狀語從句；另外，Therefore , What’s more , In this way , Finally ,的運用為文章增色添彩。