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8．假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，班里從外地轉(zhuǎn)來(lái)一名同學(xué)李明，他一時(shí)無(wú)法融入到新的班集體中，感到很苦惱．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)給他寫(xiě)封信：
1．幫他分析原因：害羞，怕同學(xué)取笑．
2．給他提出建議：學(xué)習(xí)普通話(huà)，跟同學(xué)交流意見(jiàn)．
3．陳述你幫助他的具體打算．
4．詞數(shù)：120詞左右．
Dear Li Ming，
I'm sorry to know that you feel distressed at your new class．One of the reasons，I believe，is that you might be too shy to talk confidently with your classmates and maybe you are afraid that your classmates will make fun of your accent．
I am sure，with your effort，you can manage to overcome these difficulties．In my opinion，learning to speak Putonghua and comparing notes with your classmates frequently are good ways for you to make new friends．In your spare time，you should play basketball or go to some parties．At last，I suggest that you should communicate with others confidently．As for me，I'll encourage more students to study and play with you．Also，I'll help you with your study and daily life．In a word，I'm ready to help you whenever you turn to me for help．
I hope you can adapt to the new school life as soon as possible．
Yours
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是李華給班里從外地轉(zhuǎn)來(lái)一名同學(xué)李明的一封信．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱(chēng)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一幫他分析原因：害羞，怕同學(xué)取笑；二給他提出建議：學(xué)習(xí)普通話(huà)，跟同學(xué)交流意見(jiàn)．；三自己幫助他的具體打算；四提出希望．
高分句型：
1．One of the reasons，I believe，is that you might be too shy to talk confidently with your classmates and maybe you are afraid that your classmates will make fun of your accent句子里 I believe是插入語(yǔ)； that引導(dǎo)表語(yǔ)從句 you might be too shy to talk confidently with your classmates；make fun of your accent表示"取笑你的口音"．
我相信其中的一個(gè)原因是你太害羞而不能自信地和同學(xué)交談，可能你害怕你的同學(xué)會(huì)取笑你的口音．
2．In my opinion，learning to speak Putonghua and comparing notes with your classmates frequently are good ways for you to make new friends．句子里learning to speak Putonghua and comparing notes with your classmates frequently 是動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)，表示"學(xué)習(xí)普通話(huà)，經(jīng)常跟同學(xué)交流對(duì)筆記"．
依我看來(lái)，學(xué)習(xí)普通話(huà)，經(jīng)常跟同學(xué)交流對(duì)筆記是你交朋友的好方法．

解答 Dear Li Ming，
      I'm sorry to know that you feel distressed at your new class．One of the reasons，I believe，is that you might be too shy to talk confidently with your classmates and maybe you are afraid that your classmates will make fun of your accent．【高分句型一】（幫他分析原因：害羞，怕同學(xué)取笑）
     I am sure，with your effort，you can manage to overcome these difficulties．In my opinion，learning to speak Putonghua and comparing notes with your classmates frequently are good ways for you to make new friends．【高分句型二】In your spare time，you should play basketball or go to some parties．At last，I suggest that you should communicate with others confidently．（給他提出建議：學(xué)習(xí)普通話(huà)，跟同學(xué)交流意見(jiàn)．）As for me，I'll encourage more students to study and play with you．Also，I'll help you with your study and daily life．In a word，I'm ready to help you whenever you turn to me for help．（自己幫助他的具體打算） 
        I hope you can adapt to the new school life as soon as possible．（提出希望）
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours
                                                                  Li Hua

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