Question

【題目】閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

Middle and high school days are both fun and busy. Students spend their days in class, listening to the interesting and sometimes boring words of the teacher. They spend the short breaks running, playing, and shouting happily before going back to the classroom again. But how should students spend their free time outside school?

In Western countries, it is common for students to have a part-time job after school and at weekends. Students can earn their own money and learn more about the “real world”. They enjoy the extra independence and money, and parents enjoy the quiet house. However, it seems that, in China, parents worry so much about their children’ studies that they would prefer to see their children spending most of their free time studying and preparing for all those exams.

It is natural for parents to feel that way, but I believe the answer lies in balance. Sometimes, Western school children work long hours after school to make money, and so they become too tired to listen in class or have no time for homework. But Chinese students spend so much time on their studies that all else becomes less important until they want that new MP4 player.

So, find a good and healthy balance! If you have a part-time job, you’ll be happy, and your parents will also be happy because you’re spending your hard-earned money and not theirs!

[寫作內(nèi)容]

1） 概括短文的內(nèi)容要點，該部分的字?jǐn)?shù)大約30詞左右；

2） 就“如何利用課余時間”這個主題發(fā)表你的看法，至少包含以下的內(nèi)容要點，該部分的字?jǐn)?shù)大約120詞左右:

a. 以自身為例，簡述你平時是怎樣打發(fā)課余時間的；

b. 你如何看待自己利用課余時間的方式；

c. 你的父母對你利用課余時間的態(tài)度及你的看法。

[寫作要求]

你可以使用實例或其它論述方法支持你的論點，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不要抄襲閱讀材料中的句子。

Answer 1

【答案】

There is a great difference between the way high school students spend their free time, and the writer hopes to find a balance between studying and having fun.

What worries the writer is just what we students are confused about: can our “spare time” actually mean something “spare”?

Take me for example. Every day I have just 1 hour in the afternoon to do some sports. At weekends, I usually have lots of homework assigned by teachers to finish. Even if I want to do something else, I will often be stopped by my parents. Like many other parents, they just want me to study all the time until I am admitted to a famous university. As a result, I can’t control my “spare time” on my own! Looking around at my friends, I find I’m not alone in such a situation. What a boring life for us students!

I just don’t agree with my parents about their way of controlling my spare time. Yes, for us students, studying is the most important thing to do. But we can’t be separated from the outside world. Studying all the time, I’m afraid what we are learning can’t match the real world. I don’t want to depress my parents, of course; but I do think that we need to find a way to settle this problem.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是提綱類寫作，根據(jù)所給提綱，可分兩部分來寫，第一部分簡述現(xiàn)象，第二部分表達(dá)自己的觀點。第二部分又可按照所給要點分三點來寫。考生需要發(fā)揮想象、展開思維，把文章內(nèi)容寫的具體、鮮活并且要有說服力。成文時要注意：1.文章主要用第一人稱；2.時態(tài)：靈活變換；3.文章的內(nèi)容要點要齊全；4.注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，以提高文章的檔次；5.注意使用一些連接詞，使得文章表達(dá)自然、流暢。6.注意文章的字?jǐn)?shù)控制，120單詞左右。7.不能使用原文語句。

【亮點說明】本文是按要求寫文章，內(nèi)容齊全，語言流暢，銜接緊密，使用高級句子。What worries the writer is just what we students are confused about在句中what分別引導(dǎo)主語從句和表語從句，起雙重作用；Even if I want to do something else, I will often be stopped by my parents. Even if引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句；Like many other parents, they just want me to study all the time until I am admitted to a famous university. Until引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句；Looking around at my friends, I find I’m not alone in such a situation.現(xiàn)在分詞作時間狀語；What a boring life for us students! What引導(dǎo)的感嘆句恰如其分；studying is the most important thing to do.動名詞作主語，動詞不定式作后置定語；另外，Take me for example，At weekends，As a result，for us students，But的運(yùn)用為文章增色添彩。