Question

假設(shè)你叫李華，現(xiàn)是北京大學(xué)的一名新生。請你根據(jù)以下提示，給你中學(xué)的英語老師王老師寫一封感謝信，表達(dá)對他的愛戴和尊敬。詞數(shù)120左右。

提示：

1．對英語王老師教學(xué)的評價。

2．回顧在校時你的心情。

3．對老師的理解和祝愿。

信的開頭已經(jīng)寫好，但不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Mr. Wang,

I’m very excited to write to express my thanks to you.

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Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr Wang,

I’m very excited to write to express my thanks to you. I am now a freshman of Beijing University, which I have been dreaming about. Mr Wang, I still remember the days when you taught me English. My English has been improved greatly because of your creative work. However, at one time, the pressure of examinations, too much homework and the high expectations made me depressed. I was tired of the warning that if I didn’t do my best, I wouldn’t have the chance to go to college. Thanks for your encouragement; if not, I wouldn’t have realized my dream. And now I really understand you. I wish more and more of your students could go to their ideal colleges. Are you still so busy? How I miss you!

Look forward to hearing/Hoping to hear from you soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇書信類作文，假設(shè)你叫李華，現(xiàn)是北京大學(xué)的一名新生。請你根據(jù)以下提示，給你中學(xué)的英語老師王老師寫一封感謝信，表達(dá)對他的愛戴和尊敬，所以要用第一人稱來寫。需要寫的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，但是寫作時不要僅僅對要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時注意要求的字?jǐn)?shù)120左右，不要太多也不要太少。

考點(diǎn)：書信類作文

點(diǎn)評：本文屬于書信類作文，動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。