【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

During the National Day holiday, I paid a visit my grandma in the countryside. It has been almost two years since I last saw her. In my memory, my grandma was a hardworking but strong woman full of energy. Whenever she saw me, she always hugged me deep. But when I gave her a hug this time, I found that she was much short and thinner than before. Her back was become bent and her hairs turned white. But luckily, she was still health. She could laugh like a child. To my happy, she could cook some delicious food for me. I love my grandma. I know he will always be there, helping me and loving me.

【答案】

【1】paid a visit∧ my加to

【2】has→had

【3】but→and

【4】deep→deeply

【5】short→shorter

【6】become去掉/become→becoming

【7】hairs→hair

【8】health→healthy

【9】happy→happiness

【10】he→she

【解析】

試題分析：本文講述了作者國慶節(jié)期間去看望農(nóng)村的奶奶，發(fā)現(xiàn)奶奶雖然比以前老了，但仍然像以前一樣很愛作者。

【1】paid a visit∧ my加to 固定搭配：paid a visit to...拜訪……，故在paid a visit∧ my加to。

【2】has→had 根據(jù)前面的During the National Day holiday可知，此處用過去完成時(shí)態(tài)，故把has改為had。

【3】but→and 句意：在我的記憶中，我奶奶是一個(gè)勤勞而堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的女人。此處表示遞進(jìn)的并列關(guān)系，故把but改為and。

【4】deep→deeply 此處表示抽象概念“深深地”，故把deep改為deeply。

【5】short→shorter 根據(jù)than可知，用比較級，故把short改為shorter。

【6】become去掉/become→becoming 此處用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)的被動語態(tài)或現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)態(tài)的被動語態(tài)，表示“背彎了”或“背正彎了”，故把become去掉或改為becoming。

【7】hairs→hair 根據(jù)句意可知，此處hair是不可數(shù)名詞，故把hairs改為hair。

【8】health→healthy 這里用形容詞作表語，故把health改為healthy。

【9】happy→happiness 形容詞性物主代詞my后面用名詞，故把happy改為happiness。

【10】he→she 根據(jù)上文內(nèi)容可知，指grandma，故應(yīng)該把he改為she。

【知識拓展】

to作介詞講時(shí)的用法

to作介詞講時(shí)，后面常用名詞、代詞賓格和動名詞。

the key to solving the problem 解決這個(gè)問題的關(guān)鍵；the road to success 通向成功的路；a trip to London 倫敦的一次旅行；a visit to Paris pay巴黎的一次訪問；pay attention to 重視； object to反對；look forward to期盼。

【知識歸納】

1.deep深的---deeply深深地；high高的---highly高度地；wide寬的---widely廣泛地；close近的，親密的---closely仔細(xì)地。

2.enter不能和into在同一句中使用；repeat不能和again在同一句中使用；return不能和back在同一句中使用；because/because of/as/since（因?yàn)椋荒芎蛃o在用一句中出現(xiàn)；though/although/while/in spite of/despite(盡管)，不能和but在同一句中使用。

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