Question

【題目】你校學生會舉辦捐助活動以資助貧困地區(qū)兒童上學。請你為國際部的外籍學生寫一份英文通知：

1、介紹活動的目的

2、號召大家踴躍捐款、捐物（書籍、文具、衣物），并參加義賣活動

3、義賣時間、地點：周六上午9點，校階梯教室

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2． 可適當加入細節(jié)，以使內容充實、行文連貫。

提示詞：義賣：Charity Sale； 階梯教室：lecture hall

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Answer 1

【答案】

NOTICE

The Students’ Union of our school is scheduled to hold a Charity Sale on Saturday to raise money for children in the poverty-stricken area. The efforts to be made are to support the children to continue their school education.

You are also asked to donate some of your books, stationeries and clothes, which might be of some use to the kids in those areas. At 9 a.m. this Saturday, the Charity Sale starts at the lecture hall of our school. We are expecting you to come and offer a helping hand. Remember, all the money will go to the support of those needy children and every donation makes a difference.

The Students’ Union

【解析】

試題分析：你校學生會舉辦捐助活動以資助貧困地區(qū)兒童上學。請你為國際部的外籍學生寫一份英文通知：1、介紹活動的目的；2、號召大家踴躍捐款、捐物（書籍、文具、衣物），并參加義賣活動；3、義賣時間、地點：周六上午9點，校階梯教室。寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫.要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系。根據(jù)句意適當使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2． 可適當加入細節(jié)，以使內容充實、行文連貫。

【亮點說明】The Students’ Union of our school is scheduled to hold a Charity Sale on Saturday to raise money for children in the poverty-stricken area.被動語態(tài)的運用；The efforts to be made are to support the children to continue their school education.動詞不定式被動式作定語；You are also asked to donate some of your books, stationeries and clothes, which might be of some use to the kids in those areas被動語態(tài)和非限制性定語從句的結合；Remember, all the money will go to the support of those needy children and every donation makes a difference.并列句的運用。