Question

假設你是李華，你上個星期天去市圖書館看書時發(fā)現以下問題，你寫信向館長Mr Li反映：

1．新書太少；

2．書架上的書比較混亂；

3．閱覽室的一盞燈壞了；

4．管理員工作時彼此閑聊。

注意：

1．詞數100~120左右；

2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3．信的開頭和結尾已經為你寫好，不計入總詞數。

Dear Mr. Li,

Last Sunday, I went to do some reading in your library._______________________________

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So, for the sake of readers, I suggest that you change all these as soon as possible.

Yours, 

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

Dear Mr. Li,

Last Sunday, I went to do some reading in your library. Over the time 1 was there, I found something unpleasant. Therefore, I' d like to voice my opinions, which, I hope, would be of help for you to create a more comfortable place for readers.

First, there are few new books on the shelves, and most books are not popular today. Second, some books are not sorted in proper order, making it difficult for readers to find what they want quickly. Third, the assistants didn't offer good service. Instead, they were chatting. In addition, they took no notice of the fact that a light wasn't working. Leave this state of affairs to stay the same, and I am afraid there will be fewer and fewer readers.

So, for the sake of readers, I suggest that you change all these as soon as possible.

Yours, 

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇以寫信形式的作文，注意信的格式，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化，尤其是數字的不同表達法。

考點：考查綜合能力

點評：一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。