Question

【題目】閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫(xiě)，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。

My family and I go to the Big Island of Hawaii in the United States every year. Each year, we do the same things-spend time at the beaches, surfing and fishing. On this trip, however, my family got tired of this holiday style and wanted to do something different. We learned from a local that there was a hot spring on the island called the Boiling Pots. Without doing any research, we decided to set off on an adventure to that spot.

We drove to the destination, but were surprised to find that the area was closed off by a fence (柵欄). Reading the sign placed in front of the gate, we found out it was, in fact, a forbidden area that lay at the bottom of the mountain. And we were on the mountaintop. Seemingly out of nowhere, a strange man came up to us. He told us he would go to the Boiling Pots and that he would show us the way down there if we would just jump over the fence and follow him. After some discussion, my family, 8 members, followed the man past the fence.

The 'path' was a slope (斜坡) covered in mud and high grass. Several times, our members fell but nobody gave up and turned back because it seemed an amazing adventure.

After about one hour's walk, we arrived at the bottom finally, but a large river stopped us. The strange man went to borrow a boat from his friend living nearby. We stood on the bank, waiting for him and joking that we could swim across the river.

Just then, I heard the voice of my father screaming at us to move. I looked up to the sky and saw a large tree falling towards us. I ran forward, pushing the people in front of me. I fell to the ground, hearing a loud sound of the tree hitting the ground, along with pieces of branches surrounding us.

注意:

1. 所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2. 至少使用5個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；

3. 續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好；

4. 續(xù)寫(xiě)完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。

Paragraph 1:

In a second, all went quiet

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Paragraph 2:

When we had no idea what to do, the strange man came back.

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Answer 1

【答案】Paragraph 1:

In a second all went quiet. I slowly got up, looking around to see if anyone was hurt. However, one person did it faster than me. It was my father. He rushed to us, asking us, 'Is everyone OK?' His voice was full of anxiety and love. Luckily, all were safe, except my little sister who had injured her left knee. We all surrounded her to check whether she could walk normally. She tried to stand up but failed because of the ache.

Paragraph 2:

When we had no idea what to do, the strange man came back. He said that the moment he heard the loud sound, he returned immediately. Seeing what we had experienced, he said sorry to us again and again, and told us the dangerous situation could be the reason why the area was a forbidden one. We had to give up our plan to the hot spring. With the strange man's help, we made a little 'bed' with the branches, and carried my little sister back finally. What an adventure!

【解析】

這是一篇讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)。文章講述了作者和家人在旅途中因?yàn)閰捑肓嗣磕晗嗤�的度假模式，跟著陌生人去尋找“溫泉”的冒險(xiǎn)經(jīng)歷。

續(xù)寫(xiě)分為兩個(gè)部分。第一部分的開(kāi)頭是：一瞬間，一切都安靜了……所以可以接著寫(xiě)：我慢慢站起來(lái)，四處張望，看有沒(méi)有人受傷。但父親動(dòng)作比我快。他沖過(guò)來(lái)對(duì)我們說(shuō)“大家都好吧？”他的聲音充滿了擔(dān)心和愛(ài)。很幸運(yùn)，我們都很安全，除了最小的妹妹受了傷。我們幫她處理好傷口，然后扶著她站起來(lái)。

第二部分的開(kāi)頭是：正當(dāng)我們不知該如何時(shí)，那個(gè)陌生人回來(lái)了……所以可以接著寫(xiě)：他說(shuō)他也聽(tīng)到了那個(gè)巨大的聲音，因此立刻返回。看到我們的情況，他覺(jué)得很抱歉，說(shuō)：“這個(gè)地方不準(zhǔn)進(jìn)來(lái)的原因就是隨時(shí)可能有危險(xiǎn)情況發(fā)生�！弊罱K，我們經(jīng)過(guò)商量決定放棄去溫泉。在那個(gè)陌生人的幫助下，我們用藤曼做了一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)易的“床”，把妹妹抬回去。這真是一次“新鮮的”經(jīng)歷。

續(xù)寫(xiě)時(shí)應(yīng)注意時(shí)態(tài)和人稱的運(yùn)用。用五個(gè)以上的關(guān)鍵詞加大了寫(xiě)作的難度，考生應(yīng)熟悉關(guān)鍵詞，以便在適當(dāng)時(shí)應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作完成后要按要求將關(guān)鍵詞下劃線。