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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文， 請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線( \ )劃掉。

修改：在錯詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

I was often laughed at my classmates before I turned 14 because I was always very nervous when talking to someone. Helpful and sad, I felt that I could do nothing. You cannot imagine what great difficulty I have in my life. And later, something happened, what changed my life completely. It was an English speech contest and my mother encouraged me to take part in it. I tried her best to remember the whole speech “Believe in yourself” and practised them over 100 times. Believe it or not, I finally won the first prize. Heard the cheers from the teachers and students, I stood here, with my eyes full of excited tear.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】at后面加by

【2】Helpful→Helpless

【3】have→had

【4】And→But

【5】what→which

【6】her→my

【7】them→it

【8】Heard→Hearing

【9】here→there

【10】tear→tears

【解析】

【1】at后面加by 考查介詞。laugh at sb.嘲笑某人，be laughed by sb.被某人嘲笑。

【2】Helpful→Helpless 考查形容詞。句意：無助又悲傷的我什么也不能做。

【3】have→had 考查動詞的時態(tài)。整個文章用一般過去時來敘述；故把have改為had。

【4】And→But 考查連詞。句意：但是后來，發(fā)生一些事情。是轉折關系，不是順承關系，故把And改為But。

【5】what→which 考查定語從句。句意：后來發(fā)生了一些事情，這完全改變我的生活。先行詞是something happened，關系詞用which來代指整句話。

【6】her→my 考查代詞。句意：我努力記住整個演講稿并多次練習。

【7】them→it 考查代詞。代指the whole speech用it。

【8】Heard→Hearing 考查非謂語動詞。兩個句子共用一個主語I，與hear之間是主謂關系，故用現(xiàn)在分詞的形式。

【9】here→there 考查副詞。句意：我聽到老師和學生的歡呼，我站在那兒，熱淚盈眶。

【10】tear→tears 考查名詞。tear是可數(shù)名詞，不知一滴眼淚，故要用復數(shù)。