Question

【題目】假如你叫李華，是一名中學生。家鄉(xiāng)的古剎歷史悠久，聞名遐邇，游客如織，你為此而自豪。但你最近很苦惱，因為有些人打起了古剎的主意，想把它拆掉建成工廠。為保護古剎，你給某英語報社寫一封信，提出以下幾點建議：

1. 限制游客數(shù)量以保護古剎；2. 建立網(wǎng)站，供人們網(wǎng)上欣賞；3. 另選其他地點建立工廠。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 信的開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總數(shù)。

Dear Editor,

I’m a student. I’ve been proud of Gucha, an old temple in my village.

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I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor,

I’m a student, I’ve been proud of Gucha, an old temple in my village. It’s a cultural relic with a long history, which makes it so famous that many tourists visit it every year.

But now I feel worried about it. Though much money is brought in, part of it has been badly destroyed. Worse still, some people in my village want to pull it down and build a new factory where the old temple is. It represents the past of my village, so it should be protected well.

The number of the visitors should be limited to protect the old temple. Also, a website should be built where people can look at the pictures of the temple without destroying its beauty. As for the factory, it should be built in some other places. Do you think so?

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：考查應用文中的書信的寫作。為保護古剎，你給某英語報社寫一封信，提出以下幾點建議。要點都已經(jīng)給出，書信類短文的關鍵在于要點要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時注意謀篇布局的順序，運用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時選擇高級的詞匯和語法項目讓文章更有文采。審題時注意時態(tài)的選擇，描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用高級詞匯和固定短語準確表述。

【亮點說明】范文主要運用了現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，時態(tài)方面把握準確；范文使用了一些常用的短語：be proud of為……感到自豪；pull down拆掉；look forward to期待；which makes it so famous that many tourists visit it every year這句話用了非限制性定語從句；用worse still，as for使文章條理清晰，更加連貫。范文還多次運用should be done的被動語態(tài)，使文章語法內容更加豐富。