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5．石嘴山市三中要求每個(gè)班級(jí)每學(xué)期舉行"每月之星"（ Star of the Month） 評(píng)選活動(dòng)．同學(xué)們就如何當(dāng)選為"每月之星"而開展討論：
有些同學(xué)認(rèn)為待人友善，尊重、關(guān)心他人等；還有同學(xué)認(rèn)為應(yīng)該視班級(jí)為大家庭，熱心班級(jí)活動(dòng)，工作負(fù)責(zé)等．請(qǐng)客觀的介紹討論情況及你的觀點(diǎn)．
注意：1．短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)，要適度發(fā)揮．
     2．開頭已為你寫好，但不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)．
     3．注意書寫工整、卷面整潔．
4．詞數(shù)：120詞左右．
Most students desire to be the Star of the Month，but not everyone can get it．What is the secret to it？
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Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息石嘴山市三中要求每個(gè)班級(jí)每學(xué)期舉行"每月之星"（ Star of the Month） 評(píng)選活動(dòng)．同學(xué)們就如何當(dāng)選為"每月之星"而開展討論，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：有些同學(xué)認(rèn)為待人友善，尊重、關(guān)心他人等；還有同學(xué)認(rèn)為應(yīng)該視班級(jí)為大家庭，熱心班級(jí)活動(dòng)，工作負(fù)責(zé)等．請(qǐng)客觀的介紹討論情況及你的觀點(diǎn)．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：in a friendly way以一種友好的方式；are supposed to應(yīng)該；regardless of不管，不顧；take an active part in積極參加； In my opinion以我的觀點(diǎn)來看；be strict with 對(duì)…要求嚴(yán)格；make every effort to 不遺余力地去做； not only，but also不僅，而且
Others think we are supposed to regard the class as our big family and even offer to do what we can do for the class regardless of our personal interests whenever necessary．（高分句型一）
While taking an active part in all our class activities，we should work responsibly．（高分句型二）
 In my opinion，to be the Star of Campus，we ought to be strict with ourselves in everything we do at school and make every effort to achieve all-round development，being good not only at our lessons but also at sports，music，painting，and social services and so on．（高分句型三）

解答 Most students desire to be the Star of theMonth，but not everyone can get it．What is the secret to it？
        Some students believe that we should act towards others in a friendly way，and show respect and concern for others．Others think we are supposed to regard the class as our big family and even offer to do what we can do for the class regardless of our personal interests whenever necessary．（高分句型一）While taking an active part in all our class activities，we should work responsibly．（高分句型二）（不同觀點(diǎn)）
        In my opinion，to be the Star of Campus，we ought to be strict with ourselves in everything we do at school and make every effort to achieve all-round development，being good not only at our lessons but also at sports，music，painting，and social services and so on．（高分句型三）（個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)）

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