Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的示意圖及其說(shuō)明，寫(xiě)一篇100詞左右的短文，在該校的網(wǎng)頁(yè)上介紹No.1 Middle School。

說(shuō)明：1. ①-④籃球場(chǎng)（basketball court）
⑤ 餐廳 ⑥ 學(xué)生宿舍 ⑦ 教師宿舍 ⑧-⑨花壇 （flower bed ）
2. 所有大樓四周都種有樹(shù)木和花草。
3. 學(xué)校占地130畝。
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Answer 1

No. 1 Middle School is in the west of the city on the bank of Chengxi River. It covers an area of 130 mu. When you enter the school, you can see a big flower bed in front of you, and two large buildings on both sides---the library on your right and the teaching building on your left. Walking on further, you will find the gym, which is the most beautiful building on the campus, with another round flower bed in front. Behind it, There lie four basketball courts. Next to the courts is the sports ground. Along its east side stand three buildings, the dining hall and two dormitories for the students and teachers. All the buildings are surrounded by trees and flowers. It is really a beautiful school.

試題分析：這篇文章是圖畫(huà)類寫(xiě)作，要求在該校的網(wǎng)頁(yè)上介紹No.1 Middle School，所以學(xué)校的方位圖很重要，要求考生認(rèn)真審圖，結(jié)合文字說(shuō)明，將圖介紹清楚，同時(shí)介紹細(xì)節(jié)，注意方位的表達(dá)，也要按照文體和篇章要求組織語(yǔ)篇。最后要給文章潤(rùn)色，注意措辭、復(fù)雜句式及承上啟下的自然銜接，校對(duì)細(xì)節(jié)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】所給范文語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔，運(yùn)用了好的詞組和句子：covers an area of 占據(jù)…面積， in front of 在…前面, be surrounded by被…包圍。Walking on further, you will find the gym, which is the most beautiful building on the campus, with another round flower bed in front. 這句話用了非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，定語(yǔ)從句和with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)，Behind it, There lie four basketball courts. Next to the courts is the sports ground. Along its east side stand three buildings, the dining hall and two dormitories for the students and teachers. 這三句話都用了倒裝句。