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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下短文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Mrs Smith heard her new neighbor would come and moved into his new house, but she hadn’t seen him. One day when she came back, she saw a man wear a brown hat and dark glasses carrying a ladder on his shoulder. The man put the ladder against the window of the new house and went up to break in the window. Mrs Smith said to himself, “Thief, it is a thief.” She rang up the police immediate and soon two policemen appeared in the front of the house. When the man was told to hand in everything what he had stolen, he looked greatly surprising. It was then he understood the reason why the policemen came. He said in a smile on his face, “I can’t find my key. It’s my new house.”

Answer 1

【答案】1. moved→move

2. wear→wearing

3. in→into

4. himself→herself

5. immediate→immediately

6. 去掉 front 前面的 the

7. what→that 或去掉 everything or what

8. surprising→surprised

9. then 后加 that

10. in→with

【解析】1. come和moved是并列動詞，都與前面的would構(gòu)成謂語動詞，而would是情態(tài)動詞，后面的動詞要用原形，故把moved改為move。

2. 本句應(yīng)該表示“看到某人正穿著……”，用see sb. doing sth.。故把wear改為wearing。

3. 此處表示打破窗戶，用break into，break into有“闖入”的意思，故把in改為into。

4. 句子主語是Mrs Smith，是女性，所以反身代詞應(yīng)該用herself。故把himself改為herself。

5. immediate在句中修飾動詞rang up，應(yīng)該用副詞修飾謂語動詞。故把immediate改為immediately。

6. in the front of 表示在事物范圍內(nèi)的前面，而in front of表示在事物范圍外的前面。根據(jù)上文內(nèi)容可知，警察出現(xiàn)在房子（外面的）前面，故把the去掉。

7. 先行詞是everything，關(guān)系詞應(yīng)該用that引導(dǎo)定語從句，在從句中作had stolen的賓語；因為是作賓語，所以也省去that不用關(guān)系代詞；再或者去掉everything，直接用what引導(dǎo)賓語從句。故把what改為that或去掉everything or what。

8. surprising意為“令人吃驚的”，修飾事物；surprised意為“感到吃驚的”，修飾人。本句修飾主語he，應(yīng)該用surprised。故把surprising改為surprised。

9. 該句是強調(diào)句型：It is/was+被強調(diào)部分+that+其他。本句中的被強調(diào)部分是then，that不能省去。故在then后面加that。

10. with a smile意為“含笑”，是固定搭配。故把in改為with。