分析 本文是一篇提綱作文.根據(jù)所提供的材料信息,寫一篇短文,闡述人在感到特別沮喪的時(shí)候該如何學(xué)會(huì)克服這種情緒.寫作要點(diǎn):1.描述一件使你感到特別沮喪的事情;2.說(shuō)明你是如何克服沮喪以及你的感受.
寫作時(shí)人稱以第一人稱為主,時(shí)態(tài)以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主.
重要短語(yǔ):draw near(來(lái)臨),bury oneselfin (完全投入到),burn the midnight oil (開(kāi)夜車),be well prepared (準(zhǔn)備充分),stare at(盯著…看),go blank (一片空白),allow sb to do (允許某人做某事),stay lockedaway (保持封閉的狀態(tài)),refuse todo(拒絕做某事),care about (關(guān)心),seek help(尋求幫助),fade away(消失),have the confidence to do (有自信做某事).
【高分句型】
1.Knowing what it meant for a Senior Three student,I buried myself in study.
這里是現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作原因狀語(yǔ),主句為 I buried myself in study,主句的主語(yǔ)為I,與所給動(dòng)詞know存在邏輯上的主動(dòng)關(guān)系.
2.①It couldn't be more depressing when I stared at my low rank,②my mind going blank.
①這里是否定詞與形容詞比較級(jí)連用表最高級(jí)的含義,可理解為"It could be the most depressing".
②這里是獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu),結(jié)構(gòu)為"主格詞+現(xiàn)在分詞",主句為It couldn't be more depressing when I stared at my low rank,主句的主語(yǔ)是It,與現(xiàn)在分詞的邏輯主語(yǔ)my mind 不一致.
解答 How I Overcame Depression
The final exam of last term was drawingnear.Knowing what it meant for a Senior Three student,I buried myself instudy.【高分句型】So many nights found me burning the midnight oil.Ithought I was well prepared.Sometimes,however,hard work was just not enough.It couldn't be more depressing when I stared at my low rank,my mind goingblank.【高分句型】But my pride didn't allow me to appear weak.So I stayed locked away,refusing to talk to anyone.【高分句型】(描述一件感到特別沮喪的事情)
Fortunately,it wasn't long before Irealized what I was doing was actually hurting those who care about me anddoing myself no good.【高分句型】So I went to seek help from my parents.Withthem motivating me,my depression faded away.【高分句型】Now I have the confidence to win the battlein my Senior Three and brave any difficulty in my life.(如何克服沮喪以及感受)
點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關(guān)系,盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次,平時(shí)需注意積累短語(yǔ)和重要句型.
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