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6．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文．文中
共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或
修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（/\），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
      2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
    Last weekend my sister went to the supermarket to buy some groceries．Three hours ago，with full bags of goods in both hands，she headed for nearby bus stop，tired and hungry．She was waiting for the bus while it began to rain．After what seemed ages，came a bus，crowded of passengers．When it was her turn to getting on the bus，someone said，"Sorry，no more rooms．"Quite disappointed，my sister had to take a taxi．Half way home，however，the taxi broke out．Hardly had he got out of the taxi when a bus passed by．It was empty，but she had been missed it!What an unluckily day!

Answer 1

分析 文章大意：本文主要講述了作者的妹妹去超市購(gòu)物后回家路上的經(jīng)歷．上個(gè)周末，作者的妹妹去超市購(gòu)物，三個(gè)小時(shí)后，她兩手提滿了袋子，朝著附近的車(chē)站去，又累又餓，在她等車(chē)的時(shí)候，天開(kāi)始下雨，好像過(guò)了很長(zhǎng)時(shí)間，車(chē)終于來(lái)了，車(chē)上擠滿了乘客．當(dāng)輪到她上車(chē)的時(shí)候，有人說(shuō)，"對(duì)不起，沒(méi)有空間了．"妹妹感到很失望，于是打的，但是半路上出租車(chē)拋錨了，妹妹一下車(chē)，就有一輛公共汽車(chē)經(jīng)過(guò)，上面是空的，但可惜的是，有錯(cuò)過(guò)了．

解答 Last weekend my sister went to the supermarket to buy some groceries．Three hours 
 
ago，with full bags of goods in both hands，she headed for/\nearby bus stop，tired and
later                                                                            a/the
hungry．She was waiting for the bus while it began to rain．After what seemed ages，
                                                     when
came a bus，crowded of passengers．When it was her turn to gettingon the bus，
                             with                                                       get
 someone said，"Sorry，no more rooms．"Quite disappointed，my sister had to take a
                                                 room
taxi．Half way home，however，the taxi broke out．Hardly had hegot out of the taxi
                                                                     down                 she
when a bus passed by．It was empty，but she had been missed it!What an unluckily 
                                                                         去掉                            unlucky
day!
1．a(chǎn)go--later 考查副詞．文中表示購(gòu)物后回家，所以應(yīng)該是三小時(shí)之后，應(yīng)該用later．
2．nearby  前面加a/the 考查冠詞．stop是車(chē)站的意思，是可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)形式，應(yīng)該用冠詞a/the．
3．while--when 考查連詞．表示就在此時(shí)，用when，while后面接持續(xù)性動(dòng)詞．
4．of--with 考查介詞搭配．crowded with是固定搭配．
5．getting--get 考查動(dòng)詞不定式．It is one's turn to do sth，所以這里應(yīng)該用to get．
6．rooms--room 考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)．room在文中是"空間"的意思，是不可數(shù)名詞，所以不能用復(fù)數(shù)形式．
7．out--down 考查動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)搭配．break down表示拋錨，出故障．
8．he--she 考查人稱代詞．文中講的是妹妹，所以用she．
9．去掉been 考查謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的語(yǔ)態(tài)．妹妹已經(jīng)錯(cuò)過(guò)了公交車(chē)，應(yīng)該是主動(dòng)關(guān)系，所以用主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，去掉been．
10．unluckily--unlucky 考查形容詞．修飾名詞用形容詞．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 改錯(cuò)題要注意代詞，連詞以及詞性、人稱的轉(zhuǎn)化．
做好短文改錯(cuò)題，可以從以下三方面去考慮：1．快速閱讀短文，如抓住中心思想，從整體上對(duì)短文有個(gè)了解． 2．充分運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)，從句型結(jié)構(gòu)、詞的變化、詞類選擇、詞的搭配、習(xí)慣用法出發(fā)，進(jìn)行分析判斷，盡快找出錯(cuò)誤在何處． 3．重視整體和語(yǔ)境，從上下文關(guān)系中找出表達(dá)連接關(guān)系或邏輯關(guān)系的詞或詞組，判斷是遞進(jìn)關(guān)系還是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，是因果關(guān)系還是讓步關(guān)系．