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【題目】某英語報正在就中學生可不可以帶手機上學這一話題開展討論。假如你是李華，請你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，向該報編輯寫一封英文信，發(fā)表觀點。

手機的優(yōu)點	1．便于與父母和朋友聯(lián)系； 2．能增加樂趣。
帶手機上學 存在的問題	1．上課時使用手機干擾教學；2．用手機聊天、上網(wǎng)時費錢。
建議	1．上課時不許使用手機； 2．貴重物品，個人宜妥善保管。

注意：1．信的開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；

2．詞數(shù)：不少于100字。

Dear Editor :

I’m a senior three student . I’m writing to tell you my opinion

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Editor,

I’m a senior two student . I’m writing to tell you my opinion on whether middle school students can go to school with mobile phones. I think they can do that. Because students can stay in touch with their friends and family wherever they are. Besides, the mobile phone is a way to have fun.

However, there are some problems with using mobile phones. The ring of phones can disturb teachers and students in the classroom. Another problem is that some students can spend too much time and money on phone calls and sending messages.

In conclusion,I suggest students not use phones in the classroom. Also, as it is expensive,the owner should take good care of it.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：本文是一篇提綱類作文，是一篇正反觀點類文章。我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來. 動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮點說明】范文中運用一些常見的短語stay in touch with與。。保持聯(lián)系；have fun娛樂；spend too much time and money on花費時間和錢在。。上；In conclusion總而言之；I’m writing to tell you my opinion whether middle school students can go to school with mobile phones.這個句子whether引導同位語從句；In conclusion, I suggest that students should not use phones in the classroom這個句子suggest 建議，賓語從句用（should） do 。