Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的美國筆友Johnson來信說他因對父母說謊而受到嚴厲批評，因此他情緒低落。請你用英語給他寫一封回信，主要內容包括：

1.進行安慰；

2.指正錯誤；

3.給出建議。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3.開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Johnson,

I’m sorry to hear that you feel depressed now. _________________________________________________

_______________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Johnson,

I’m sorry to hear that you feel depressed now. although it’s a shame that you got punished severely by your parents, it’s a useful experience and lesson for you. so you don’t have to feel so depressed, and just let it go.

As a high school student, it’s wrong for you to lie to your parents. We have been taught to be honest since we were very young. We should behave honestly and be ourselves in daily life. in addition, if you get into trouble and need your parents’ help, you’d better go ahead to say them out to them. In a word, don’t make up any excuse and lie to your parents. I hope you can feel better and come back to the normal life.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】根據(jù)題目要求你需要就Johnson因對父母撒謊受到嚴厲批評的事情向他寫一封回信，題目中明確要求要有：進行安慰；指正錯誤；給出建議三個方面的內容。

首先，同學們要使用較為柔和的語氣對Johnson進行安慰并達到平復其情緒的目的；然后要明確地指出撒謊是不正確的行為，要告訴Johnson撒謊會造成哪些不好的結果和影響以及為什么不能撒謊；最后向Johnson提出幾條中肯的建議如多和父母溝通等等。

同學們要能適當把握三個部分的內容，使文章內容相協(xié)調，使用恰當?shù)倪B接詞，使語義連貫，連接順暢。

【范文亮點】

范文有一些值得大家學習的地方，如：文章使用了很多優(yōu)秀的短語：in addition 除此之外；go ahead 前進；make up編造，等等；文章也使用了多樣的句式，如讓步狀語從句“although it’s a shame that you got punished severely by your parents……”，被動語句“we have been taught to be honest since we were very young”等等。