【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處,多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Guilin is in Guangxi Zhuang Autonomous Region, China, famous of its mountains and waters. I went here last summer and stayed for five day. During that time not only I enjoy the fascinating scenery like the unique mountains and clean rivers, but also I try the traditional weaving of Zhuang people. That impressed me most was the amazing folk-song-singing competition on the Li River, which attracted thousands of visitors or locals. Guilin enjoys a worldwide fame for it beautiful scenery, so it's well worth visiting. I am strongly recommend you to visit it. I believe you will have a wonderfully time.

【答案】1.of改為for

2. here改為 there

3. day改為days

4. I前加did

5.try改為tried

6. That改為What

7. or改為and

8. it改為its

9.去掉am

10. wonderfully改為 wonderful

【解析】介詞用法錯(cuò)誤。里應(yīng)當(dāng)用短語(yǔ)be famous for因……而聞名。句意：桂林以它的山水而聞名。故將of改為for。

副詞用法錯(cuò)誤。根據(jù)句意可知，這里應(yīng)當(dāng)為我去那兒。句意：去年夏天，我去過那兒。故將here改為there。

名詞數(shù)用法錯(cuò)誤。名詞day為可數(shù)名詞，故用復(fù)數(shù)形式。句意：在那兒呆了5天。故將day改為days。

考查倒裝。本句not only在句首，用主謂倒裝。句意：在那段時(shí)間里，我不僅欣賞到獨(dú)一無(wú)二的迷人景色。故在I前加did。

時(shí)態(tài)用法錯(cuò)誤。根據(jù)全文可知，用一般過去時(shí)。句意：但我也嘗試過壯族人的傳統(tǒng)編織。故將try改為tried。

主語(yǔ)從句關(guān)系詞用法錯(cuò)誤。主語(yǔ)從句中，從句缺少主語(yǔ)，故用關(guān)系詞what。句意：給我印象最深的是那次令人驚嘆的民歌演唱比賽。故將That改為What。

連詞用法錯(cuò)誤。根據(jù)句意可知，這里是并列關(guān)系。句意：吸引了成千上萬(wàn)的游客和當(dāng)?shù)厝�。故�?/span>or改為and。

代詞用法錯(cuò)誤。名詞beautiful scenery前用代詞。句意：桂林以其美麗的景色而聞名于世。故將it改為its。

謂語(yǔ)用法錯(cuò)誤。句中謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞為recommend，am多余。句意：我強(qiáng)烈推薦你去那里參觀。故去掉am。

詞性用法錯(cuò)誤。修飾名詞time，前用形容詞修飾。句意：我相信你會(huì)玩得很開心的。故將wonderfully改為 wonderful。

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