Question

【題目】閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫(xiě)，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。

One morning, Ann’s neighbour Tracy found a lost dog wandering around the local elementary school. It was a beautiful dog, which attracted Tracy a lot. So Tracy thought the owner of the dog must have been worried about it and looked for it around, she was a warm-hearted woman, so she decided to help the lost dog. In no time, she asked Ann if she could keep an eye on the dog. Ann said that she could watch it only for the day.

Tracy took photos of the dog and printed off 400 FOUND flyers (傳單), and put them in mailboxes. Meanwhile, Ann went to the dollar store and bought some pet supplies, warning her two sons not to fall in love with the dog. At the time, Ann’s son Thomas was 10 years old, and Jack, who was recovering from a heart operation, was 21 years old.

Four days later Ann was still looking after the dog, which they had started to call Riley. They began to love the dog, which was so clever and cute that every member of the family loved it. One day, when Ann arrived home from work, the dog threw itself against the screen door and barked madly at her. As soon as she opened the door, Riley dashed into the boys’ room where Ann found Jack suffering from a heart attack. Riley ran over to Jack, but as soon as Ann bent over to help him the dog went silent.

“If it hadn’t come to get me, the doctor said Jack would have died,” Ann reported to a local newspaper. At this point, no one had called to claim the dog, so Ann decided to keep it.

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However, the next morning Tracy got a call.

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Peter drove to Ann’s house to pick up his dog,

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Answer 1

【答案】Paragraph 1:

However, the next morning Tracy got a call. A man named Peter had seen the flyer and recognized his lost dog. So he called the number on the flyer. Hearing this, Tracy started crying, and told him, “My friend’s son had a heart operation not long ago, and one day, he suffered a heart attack. It was the dog that saved my friend’s son.”

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Peter drove to Ann’s house to pick up his dog, but saw Thomas and Jack crying in the window. The dog was very happy to see his owner again and dashed to him in no time. After a few moments, Peter said. “Maybe Odie was supposed to find you; maybe you should keep it. And I can come to see him at times.” Hearing this, everybody was wild with joy, and the dog wagged his tail, too.

【解析】

這是一篇讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)作文。

通過(guò)閱讀所給文章可知，Ann的鄰居Tracy發(fā)現(xiàn)一只走失的狗在當(dāng)?shù)氐男�學(xué)附近徘徊，她決定幫助丟失的狗。她問(wèn)安她是否能照看一下那條狗。Ann說(shuō)她只能看一天。后來(lái)這只狗救了Ann患有心臟病的孩子Jack，Ann一家決定收養(yǎng)這只狗。

續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段，第一段開(kāi)頭是：然而，第二天早上Tracy接到了一個(gè)電話(huà)。所以后文應(yīng)該是講述狗的主人Peter來(lái)尋回這條狗，Tracy非常舍不得傷心，并告訴狗的主人狗救了她朋友孩子的故事；第二段開(kāi)頭是：Peter開(kāi)車(chē)去Ann家接他的狗，本段應(yīng)該寫(xiě)Peter看到Ann家中孩子不舍得狗離開(kāi)后的反應(yīng)，他決定讓狗留在Ann的家里。