【題目】假設你是李華,即將高中畢業(yè),對大學專業(yè)選擇比較困惑,請給曾經(jīng)做過生涯規(guī)劃師的前外教Mr.Joyce寫封信,介紹你本人在學習、個性等方面的長處以及你的職業(yè)愿景,并請他為你在選擇大學專業(yè)方面提出一些建議。

注意:1.可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫;

2.詞數(shù)100左右(格式已給出,不計入總詞數(shù))。

Dear Mr. Joyce,

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】DearMr. Joyce

I am Li Hua, one of your former students. It will be only two months before we graduate from high school, yet I am quite confused about what I should choose to major in the university. Since you once worked as a career planner, I am writing to consult you, hoping to get some valuable advice with regard to major application.

I am good at mathematics and physics. Besides, my interest also goes to music, and I have been active in the school's orchestra. As for my job in the future, I want to be a scientist who will help make the world a better place. I am eagerly looking forward to your early reply!

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文,要求寫一封信。

第1步:根據(jù)提示可知,本篇為一封電子郵件;假設你即將高中畢業(yè),對大學專業(yè)選擇比較困惑,請給曾經(jīng)做過生涯規(guī)劃師的前外教Mr.Joyce寫封信,介紹你本人在學習、個性等方面的長處以及你的職業(yè)愿景,并請他為你在選擇大學專業(yè)方面提出一些建議。人稱使用第一人稱,時態(tài)應為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。

第2步:根據(jù)寫作要求,確定關鍵詞(組),如:former(以前的),graduate from(從……畢業(yè)),confused(困惑的),major(主修),career planner(生涯規(guī)劃師),consult(咨詢),valuable(有價值的),be good at(擅長)等。

第3步:根據(jù)提示及關鍵詞(組)進行遣詞造句,注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步:連句成文,注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡,書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰,保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

【亮點說明】

范文內容完整,語言規(guī)范,語篇連貫,詞數(shù)適當。作者在范文中使用了較多高級表達方式,如同位語I am Li Hua, one of your former students.;時間狀語從句It will be only two months before we graduate from high school;賓語從句yet I am quite confused about what I should choose to major in the university;原因狀語從句Since you once worked as a career planner, I am writing to consult you;定語從句As for my job in the future, I want to be a scientist who will help make the world a better place.;非謂語動詞的運用I am writing to consult you, hoping to get some valuable advice with regard to major application.全文中沒有中國式英語的句式,顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、層次分明,上下句轉換自然,為文章增色添彩。

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