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【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達(dá):more than 非常;As for 至于,關(guān)于;is located in 坐落于;as well as也,和;By the way順便說一下;
As for my favorite touring place,I will never hesitate to recommend Sichuan,which is located in the southwest of China.(高分句型一)
Sichuan enjoys a good reputation of"Land of Abundance"for its breathtaking natural scenery,rich historical and cultural heritage as well as mouth-watering spicy food.(高分句型二)
By the way,weather can be hot and changeable in summer,so it is sensible to check it before setting out.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Alice,
Hearing that you will spend the summer vacation touring in China,I'm more than glad to offer my recommendation.
As for my favorite touring place,I will never hesitate to recommend Sichuan,which is located in the southwest of China.(高分句型一)
Sichuan enjoys a good reputation of"Land of Abundance"for its breathtaking natural scenery,rich historical and cultural heritage as well as mouth-watering spicy food.(高分句型二)Also,it is home to ancient poets,artists,and political leaders known to the world.Chengdu,its capital,is a slow-paced and modern city in possession of large hotels and shopping centers.With convenient traffic network,you can travel to anywhere throughout the province.
By the way,weather can be hot and changeable in summer,so it is sensible to check it before setting out.(高分句型三)I believe you will have an unforgettable trip.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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