Question

假如你是高一學(xué)生王剛，在放寒假之前你想寫一封信給你的英文老師Mrs. Chen。

信的內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以下幾個方面：

    1） Mrs. Chen的課堂生動有趣，自己進(jìn)步很大；

         2） 自己在學(xué)習(xí)中的困難；

         3） 給老師的教學(xué)建議(至少兩條)；

注意：1）不要逐條翻譯;

2）字?jǐn)?shù)為120左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；

3）不得使用真實姓名。

Dear Mrs. Chen,

How time flies! I have been your student for nearly half a year.

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Best wishes to you!

Yours,

Wang Gang

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Mrs. Chen,

How time flies! I have been your student for nearly half a year.

To begin with, I want to say thanks to you for your hard work . Besides, we all enjoy your lively and interesting class. And with your help, we have made such great progress in English.

To be honest, I still have some puzzles. I can’t keep so many new words in mind and don’t know how to use them correctly. What’s more, grammar is a big problem to me. I often mix up its rules. Would you please help me with these problems?

Mrs. Chen, as we hope to improve our listening ability, could you please speak more English in Class? And we can’t bear so much homework of all the subjects, so would you please reduce the amount of English homework?

Best wishes to you!

                                                           Yours,

                                                           Wang Gang

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇書信體裁的書面表達(dá)，開頭結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，所以不用注意格式，只要把內(nèi)容呈現(xiàn)出來即可，但因為是給老師寫信，說話的語氣和措辭要禮貌，盡量用上一些高級的句型和詞匯，比如表示感激的I will be appreciate it if you can …..; I would be grateful if you …..; thank you for ….等，表示有困難短語：have difficulty with sth ；have trouble in doing sth等。因為提示要點包括三個方面，所以在結(jié)構(gòu)安排上，可以采用三段式。此外，在連詞成篇時，要恰當(dāng)使用連接詞，以使語言通順流暢。

【亮點說明】范文使用典型的三段式結(jié)構(gòu)，分別表達(dá)了對老師的感激，自己學(xué)習(xí)中的困難以及給老師的教學(xué)建議等，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明。在文中作者使用了to begin with，besides ，to be honest ，what’s more 等插入語和副詞，使文章語言銜接自然流暢。在提出建議時使用了could you please speak more English in Class?和Would you please reduce the amount of English homework? 等提出請求，這樣使得語氣更加委婉，增強(qiáng)了建議的可接納性。

考點：考查提綱作文。