Question

18．請(qǐng)根據(jù)如圖寫(xiě)一篇100～200個(gè)詞的短文．你的短文應(yīng)包括下列要點(diǎn)：
1．簡(jiǎn)要描述圖畫(huà)內(nèi)容；
2．說(shuō)明圖畫(huà)含義；
3．談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?br />TE              AM
There is no"I"in a team．
Don't Be Self-centered in a Class
As is shown in the picture above，       ．

Answer 1

分析 本文為看圖作文．寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意首先描述圖片點(diǎn)明主題，然后分析概述對(duì)圖片所反映的現(xiàn)象的理解，最后發(fā)表感想．寫(xiě)作時(shí)時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．
重要短語(yǔ)：self-centered（自我為中心的）；put…into…（把…放進(jìn)…）；break up（打破，解散）；In order to （為了）；cooperate and support 
                  each other（相互合作與支持）；even if （即使，雖然）；care about （擔(dān)心，關(guān)心）；no longer（不再）．
高分句型：1．This picture conveys the message that if team members are self-centered，the team may break up．
                這幅圖傳送了這樣一個(gè)信息，那就是如果一個(gè)團(tuán)隊(duì)的成員是自私的，那么這個(gè)團(tuán)隊(duì)就會(huì)解散．這是一個(gè)雙重復(fù)合句，在這個(gè)句子中that引導(dǎo)一個(gè)
                 同位語(yǔ)從句，同位語(yǔ)從句中有含有一個(gè)條件狀語(yǔ)從句．
                
                2．In order to achieve this goal，students should cooperate and support each other even if sometimes someone may have to make sacrifices．
                為了達(dá)到這個(gè)目標(biāo)，同學(xué)們應(yīng)該相互合作與支持，即便是有時(shí)候有人不得不做出犧牲．這里 even if sometimes someone may have to make    
                sacrifices  是一個(gè)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句．

                3．Only if they work as one can they achieve success．
                只有他們作為一個(gè)集體去工作，他們才能成功．這里副詞only放在句首，句子用半倒裝，故把情態(tài)動(dòng)詞can提到主語(yǔ)they的前面．

解答 Don't Be Self-centered in a Class
As is shown in the picture above，a helicopter is going to put the letter"I"into the word"Team"．But if so，the word will no longer exist．This picture conveys the message that if team members are self-centered，the team may break up（高分句型一）．（描述圖片）
A class is actually a team．All the students in the class share the same goal---to make the class an excellent team and to help everyone develop fully and healthily．In order to achieve this goal，students should cooperate and support each other even if sometimes someone may have to make sacrifices（高分句型二）．Only if they work as one can they achieve success（高分句型三）．However，if some students are self-centered and only care about themselves the teamwork will surely be negatively affected or even destroyed．I believe，there is no"I"but"we"in a team．（分析圖片的語(yǔ)意，然后給出啟示）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 在寫(xiě)這類作文時(shí)，首先要認(rèn)真分析所給提示信息，整體理解寫(xiě)作要求，然后運(yùn)用所掌握的英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，并認(rèn)真看圖，圍繞主題，發(fā)揮想象，語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔．選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．