Question

16．假如你是啟明中學（Ming Qi Middle School）的李明，想申請成為"愛共線"的暑期志愿者．根據(jù)以下啟事，寫一封申請信（信中不能提到真實姓名和學校）．

愛共線是由民間發(fā)起的愛心公益組織，主要致力于貧困地區(qū)兒童相關(guān)的援助項目． 我們期待你的加入！ 崗位1：網(wǎng)頁編輯（webpage editor） 崗位2：影像制作（cameraman） 崗位3：論壇管理員（forum administrator） 崗位4：活動組織（event organizer） 有意者請來信告知： 1）你個人的基本情況； 2）你所申請的崗位和申請的理由；

Answer 1

分析 試題分析：本篇書面表達是一篇應用文，要求寫一封申請信，要求結(jié)合給出的崗位選擇一個自己想申請的職位，并稍加發(fā)揮想象即可．寫作時需注意以下方面：1）在信的開頭一般要說明寫信的目的，本文的寫作目的是"希望申請某一職位"．2）在寫第二部分，即正文時要注意把申請網(wǎng)頁編輯這一崗位的三個原因的表述要詳略得當，應該用適當?shù)倪^渡詞來起到承接作用，以使內(nèi)容連貫，具有層次感．3）盡量使用多種句式結(jié)構(gòu)來豐富文章語言，比如并列句、復合句和短語等，做到長短句結(jié)合．4）因為是講述自己的特點和優(yōu)勢，所以要使用一般現(xiàn)在時．

重要短語：
apply to be申請成為，F(xiàn)irst of all首先，Secondly其次，Last but not least最后但同樣重要的是，devote oneself to doing致力于做某事，Once upon a time 很久以前，have no access to education沒有機會受教育，be responsible for doing負責做某事，contribute all one's energy to全力以赴，leave a deep impression on sb給某人留下深刻印象．
高分句型：
1．Once upon a time，I saw some news about these poor children who had no access to education or lacked assistance of daily necessities，which left a deep impression on me．本句中包含兩個定語從句，一個是who引導的限制性定語從句，which引導的非限制性定語從句，主句為I some news about these poor children．
2．Working as a webpage editor is easy for me這句較簡單，為動名詞短語Working as a webpage editor作主語．
3．And I assure you that I will do a great job．這句話中包含一個that引導的賓語從句．

解答 Dear Sir/Madam，
    Hello!I'm Li Ming，who is a student from Ming Qi Middle School．After seeing your advertisement，now I'm writing this letter immediately．I want to apply to be a volunteer in your organization．The job I want to take is webpage editor．（寫信目的）
    First of all，I really want to devote myself to helping children in poor areas．Once upon a time，I saw some news about these poor children who had no access to education or lacked assistance of daily necessities，which left a deep impression on me．（高分句型）So I thought I would do something for them one day．（列舉優(yōu)勢）
    Secondly，I'm good at programming．I have learnt programming for a long time．The prizes which I won in competitions are numerous．In my class，I'm responsible for designing my class's webpage．As you can see，I think I have had much experience．Working as a webpage editor is easy for me．（高分句型）（列舉優(yōu)勢）
    Last but not least，in summer vacation，I have no extra classes．So I can contribute all my energy to this job．（列舉優(yōu)勢）
    As reasons above，this job is suitable for me．And I assure you that I will do a great job．（高分句型）Please let me join your organization!（表達愿望）

點評 對于英語申請信的寫作要開篇點明寫信的目的，想申請的崗位，并且要詳細陳述自己所具備的優(yōu)勢，要以誠懇的語言打動讀信的人，在寫作中要注意靈活運用高級詞匯和固定短語準確表述，合理的使用過渡語和連接詞，使得整篇文章過度自然，銜接緊密．