Question

【題目】請根據(jù)下面的提示和參考例文寫一篇短文，介紹一位你崇拜的偶像。

① Who is he/she?

②What is he/she?

③When was he/she born?

④Something interesting you know about him/her.

⑤What do you learn from him/her?

宇數(shù)要求：100詞左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】Thomas Edison is the person I admire. He was one of the greatest scientists in the world. He was born in 1847，and died in 1931 at the age of 84. He was in school only for three months. His teacher didn't like him at all. Edison’s mother had to take him out of school and taught him herself. At home Edison read a lot and became very interested in science.

When Edison was very young, he had many strange ideas. When he was in school, he often asked a lot of questions. Most of them had nothing to do with his lessons. When he grew up he became a famous scientist.

I think I should work hard at my lessons at school, and always try to be creative in order to do something good for our motherland and the world as well.

【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文，人物不限，但是文章內(nèi)容要點已經(jīng)給出。同學們在寫這篇文章時，要注意以下幾點：

1.文章分為三段。第一段開門見山，簡要說明所寫人物及其生平；第二段重點講述一到兩個事例，豐富人物形象，寫這部分內(nèi)容時，學生可以采取簡單句和復(fù)合句結(jié)合的方法為文章添彩；第三段表達崇拜，向偶像學習。

2. 要點要齊全。但是不要對要點進行簡單的羅列。可以使用適當?shù)倪B接詞，使上下文行文流暢，銜接自然流程。3. 注意語氣。該文是介紹一位你所崇拜的偶像，要表達一定崇拜之情。

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【范文亮點】

1. 范文采取了時間狀語從句（When Edison was very young, he had many strange ideas.）和目的狀語從句（and always try to be creative in order to do something good for our motherland and the world as well.）等句式。

2. 文章采用了at the age of ，not ……at all,had to do，as well， in order to等高級單詞或短語。