Question

【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的一下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．沒出錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Nowadays, this is common to hear about a young person getting this or that kind of serious disease. A couple of day ago, a friend in her 20s asked me that I was familiar with some health products. She tells me that during the past two years, she got tired easily and seemed to be in state of sub-health. Twenty is the age in where one should feel filled with strong and energy. And some people at that age have started to worry about their health. Since we now have more access to information about keeping healthy, we should start to act responsible and pay special attention to improve our health.

Answer 1

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【解析】此處為it 做形式主語(yǔ)，to hear about a young person。。。為真正主語(yǔ)，不能用this。

A couple of days ago，此句中a couple of 修飾復(fù)數(shù)。

此處表達(dá)朋友問我是否熟悉健康食品。Whether/if 引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句。

根據(jù)語(yǔ)境她告訴我在過去的兩年里，她很容易累，看上去處于亞健康。 根據(jù)時(shí)態(tài)一致原則，她是幾天前說(shuō)的，所以用過去式。

此外處于什么狀態(tài)應(yīng)該用in a sate of。。。

Twenty is the age in where one should feel filled with strong and energy.此句中age 后跟定語(yǔ)從句，從句缺狀語(yǔ)，用where，in多余。

Feel filled with ，with為介詞后面應(yīng)該加名詞作賓語(yǔ)，所以用strength，不用strong。

根據(jù)語(yǔ)境可知此處表示轉(zhuǎn)折意義，意為但是有些人開始擔(dān)心自己的健康。

我們應(yīng)該開始負(fù)責(zé)任地開始行動(dòng)起來(lái)，修飾動(dòng)詞用副詞。

Pay attention to 中to 為介詞，所以后用doing。