Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Jim所在的學校要組織學生在疫情之后來中國旅游，有兩條線路可以選擇:”長江之行”或者”泰山之旅”，Jim來信希望你能給些建議。請你給他回信，內(nèi)容包括:

1. 你建議的路線；

2. 你的理由；

3. 你的祝愿。

注意:

1. 詞數(shù)100左右。

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

I’m more than delighted to know that you are paying a visit to China after the epidemic, which is surely a perfect destination for you to enjoy your holiday.

Both the Yangtze River and Mount Tai enjoy great reputation worldwide and are well worth a visit. As far as I’m concerned, going to Mount Tai is a better choice. First and foremost, it boasts breathtaking wonderful sights which even attracted many emperors and great poets deeply in history. In addition, climbing die mountain is really character-building, which is not only good for your physical health but also brings you lots of courage and endurance. After reaching the top, you can enjoy the fantastic sunrise till the morning, which is really a feast for eyes and makes your journey worthwhile. It’s such a must-see place that you won’t be disappointed when you go there.

Hope my suggestion will be of help. Wish you a good time.

Yours sincere,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生給朋友Jim回信建議他選擇哪一條旅游線路。

第一步：審題。

體裁：信件應用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應為一般現(xiàn)在時為主。

要點：1 Jim要來中國旅游

2建議的旅游路線

3建議的理由

4 表達祝愿

結(jié)構(gòu)布局：

第一段，聽到Jim要來中國旅游，就詢問的旅游線路提建議。

第二段， 建議的旅游路線和理由：泰山之旅。泰山景色優(yōu)美，如云海，日出等，爬山可以鍛煉身體，還能鍛煉毅力等。

第三段，表達祝愿，希望有所幫助。

第二步：列重點詞語，詞組（注意好詞的使用）

如：pay a visit, be concerned about, classic, as far as I am concerned, spectacular, make an impression on, sea of clouds, sunrise, fantastic, physical exercise, perseverance等

第三步：連詞成句（注意好句型的使用，如非謂語動詞，復合句，注意拼寫和時態(tài)問題）

如：Hearing that you are paying a visit to China after the epidemic, I am writing to make suggestions on the tour destination that you are quire concerned about. 等

第四步：連句成篇（注意銜接詞的使用）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…, Finally, In the end, At last;

2.表并列補充關系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also);

3.表因果關系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡。

第五步：潤色修改。