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14．假如你是學(xué)生會(huì)主席Li Hua，請根據(jù)下面內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇關(guān)于學(xué)生會(huì)邀請本校學(xué)生參加有關(guān)環(huán)保講座的發(fā)言稿．內(nèi)容主要包括：
參加者：高中一、二年級(jí)的學(xué)生；
時(shí)間：5月14日，下午2點(diǎn)；
地點(diǎn)：學(xué)校報(bào)告廳．
注意事項(xiàng)：（1）．準(zhǔn)時(shí)到場，聽講座時(shí)保持安靜；
（2）不攜帶零食和飲料進(jìn)入報(bào)告廳；
（3）參加者在本周五前到學(xué)生會(huì)報(bào)名；
（4）最后鼓勵(lì)同學(xué)們踴躍參加．
詞數(shù)：100左右
報(bào)告廳 school hall；  報(bào)名 sign up for
Good afternoon，everyone．
May I have your attention，please？
I am Li Hua from the Student Union．As you know，our school will hold a lecture on environment protection on May 14th at 2：00 p．m．in the school hall．The students of Senior 1 and Senior 2 are welcomed．
By the way，I would like you to t urn up on time and keep quiet when attending the lecture．It is not permitted to bring snacks and drinks into the hall．The students who are interested in this lecture should sign up for it before Friday．
I am firmly convinced that only when everybody attaches great importance to protecting the environment can the earth become a better place for us to live on．In conclusion，I sincerely hope that everybody can take an active part in the lecture，and I am looking forward to your coming．
Student Union
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇關(guān)于學(xué)生會(huì)邀請本校學(xué)生參加有關(guān)環(huán)保講座的發(fā)言稿．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一演講的時(shí)間地點(diǎn)和參加者；二注意事項(xiàng)；三保護(hù)環(huán)境的重要性并且鼓勵(lì)同學(xué)們踴躍參加．
高分句型：
1．The students who are interested in this lecture should sign up for it before Friday．句子里 who 引導(dǎo)定語從句修飾先行詞The students； sign up for 表示"報(bào)名參加"．
對這個(gè)演講感興趣的同學(xué)在本周五前到學(xué)生會(huì)報(bào)名．
2．I am firmly convinced that only when everybody attaches great importance to protecting the environment can the earth become a better place for us to live on．句子里 that 引導(dǎo)賓語從句；only 位于狀語從句when everybody attaches great importance to protecting the environment 之前，主句 can the earth become a better place for us to live on．用倒裝；attaches great importance to 表示重視．
我堅(jiān)定的相信指，只有人人都重視保護(hù)環(huán)境，地球才會(huì)更適合我們居�。�

解答 Good afternoon，everyone．
May I have your attention，please？
I am Li Hua from the Student Union．As you know，our school will hold a lecture on environment protection on May 14th at 2：00 p．m．in the school hall．The students of Senior 1 and Senior 2 are welcomed．（演講的時(shí)間地點(diǎn)和參加者）
By the way，I would like you to t urn up on time and keep quiet when attending the lecture．It is not permitted to bring snacks and drinks into the hall．The students who are interested in this lecture should sign up for it before Friday．【高分句型一】（注意事項(xiàng)）
I am firmly convinced that only when everybody attaches great importance to protecting the environment can the earth become a better place for us to live on．【高分句型二】In conclusion，I sincerely hope that everybody can take an active part in the lecture，and I am looking forward to your coming．（保護(hù)環(huán)境的重要性并且鼓勵(lì)同學(xué)們踴躍參加）
                                                                   Student Union
                                                                       Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 考查提綱類作文．
提綱類作文一般給出的要點(diǎn)比較多，但是無論是漢語還是英文的要點(diǎn)，我們在寫作時(shí)都要體現(xiàn)出來，因?yàn)樗麄兪强淳砝蠋煹囊罁?jù)．同時(shí)，如果要求有自我發(fā)揮的內(nèi)容，那么也要表達(dá)出來，否則會(huì)被減分．