Question

【題目】為了幫助中學生健康成長，某中學英文報開辟了＂HEART-TO-HEART＂專欄。假設你是該欄目的編輯Jamie，收到一封署名為Worried的求助信。信中該同學向你訴說了自己的困擾：近日容易發(fā)脾氣，使正常的學習和生活受到了影響。請用英文給該同學寫一封回信。內容要點如下：

1.表示理解并給予安慰

2.提出建議并說明理由。

注意：1.詞數120左右；

2.信中不能出現與本人相關的信息；

3.信的開頭與結尾已為你擬好，不計入總詞數。

參考詞匯：temper n. 脾氣，情緒

Hi Worried,

I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a hard time at the moment.

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Answer 1

【答案】Hi Worried,

I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be wrong so you don’t have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Here are three useful tips.

First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play the games with your friends, as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.

【解析】題目要求給Worried回一封信，回信的內容主要包括：理解并給予安慰；提出建議。寫作時注意信的格式，多使用定語從句、名詞性從句、非謂語動詞等語法知識。

文章主要用第二人稱，時態(tài)多用一般時態(tài)。

【亮點說明】范文使用了較多的重點語法知識：賓語從句know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment, how you feel, you’ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal；表語從句The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods；時間狀語從句when things seem to be going wrong, you’ll regret；目的狀語從句so that you may not do or say anything；原因狀語從句as physical exercise is an effective way to等；

范文注意使用First, Second, And third等來表示列舉，使行文顯得有條理、有層次；

范文使用了一些短語和固定搭配：talk to；a good way of；let out；go outdoors；get rid of；attitude towards；carry on；as normal等，長短句結合，使作文顯得錯落有致。