【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏子符號(hào)（/\），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤僅限1詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

It was my first Mid-Autumn Festival spending with my parents when I was 12．In the early morning, my parents and I went to the park at their car．There were lots of visitors stood in front of the ticket window．We waited a long time and buy three tickets．In the Tiger Mountain of the park, I was so eager to see the frightening animal that I quickened my steps through the crowd．Fortunately, I got separated from my parents．I had hard time looking for him, but I had no luck．Wandering in the park, I felt alone without any companions．Worse still, I had no money, but I had to walk home, covering as much as 5 kilometers．

【答案】

【1】第一句：spending---spent

【2】第二句：at---in

【3】第三句：stood---standing

【4】第四句：buy---bought

【5】第五句：animal---animals

【6】第六句：Fortunately---Unfortunately

【7】第七句：hard time前加a；

【8】第七句：him---them

【9】第八句：alone---lonely

【10】第九句：but---so

【解析】

試題分析：

【1】考查過去分詞,分析句子，可知本句中已有謂語動(dòng)詞was，故spend只能充當(dāng)非謂語。根據(jù)句意，可知它是用于修飾其前面的festival的后置定語，與festival之間是被動(dòng)關(guān)系。故用過去分詞形式。

【2】考查介詞／介詞短語，在英語中，in one’s car的意思是“坐在某人的車?yán)铩薄?/span>

【3】考查現(xiàn)在分詞，分析句子，可知本句中已有謂語動(dòng)詞was，故stand只能充當(dāng)非謂語。根據(jù)句意，可知它是用于修飾其前面的visitors的后置定語，與visitors之間是主動(dòng)關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意，故用現(xiàn)在分詞形式。

【4】考查時(shí)態(tài)和語態(tài)，根據(jù)句意，可知本句是敘述過去的事情。故動(dòng)詞用過去式。

【5】考查名詞，根據(jù)文意，可知去動(dòng)物園看的動(dòng)物必定是多種的，故animal要用復(fù)數(shù)形式。

【6】考查副詞／比較等級(jí)，根據(jù)句意，由后面的文章內(nèi)容講到作者與父母分開了，可知這是一件不幸的事情，故用Unfortunately。

【7】考查詞組／短語；冠詞，在英語中，have a hard time (in) doing sth．是固定搭配，意思是“做某事有困難”。故要在hard前加冠詞a。

【8】考查代詞／不定代詞，根據(jù)文意，作者是找不到他的父母了，因此是復(fù)數(shù)形式。故要改成them。

【9】考查形容詞／比較等級(jí)，Alone的意思是“獨(dú)自的”，lonely的意思是“孤獨(dú)的”。根據(jù)句意，故用lonely。

【10】考查連詞／連接詞，由于前一句說作者沒有錢，因此（so）他不得不走路回家了。

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