Question

【題目】 成語（Chinese idioms）是中國文化的重要組成部分，它能用簡單的詞語表達(dá)出豐富并且深刻的意義。假定你是李華，你的外國筆友James對中國成語很感興趣，向你咨詢有關(guān)中國成語的信息，請你寫一封回信，包括如下內(nèi)容：

1.簡單介紹成語;

2.學(xué)習(xí)成語的益處;

3.分享自己學(xué)習(xí)成語的感受和體會。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear James,

I am glad that you are interested in Chinese idioms.___________________________________

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I sincerely hope you can learn them well.

Yours

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear James，

I am glad that you are interested in Chinese idioms. Chinese idioms, mainly consisting of four or more Chinese characters, have been appealing to those absorbed in the Chinese language because they are an indispensable part of Chinese culture. The benefits of learning them can be listed as follows.

Firstly, with many of Chinese idioms widely used in our daily life, a good knowledge of them contributes to better understanding both spoken Chinese and written Chinese. Secondly, they usually possess vivid and profound meanings, making what you try to convey more convincing.

As far as I am concerned, I have a preference for the interesting stories behind some of the Chinese idioms. Not only are they interesting, but also they tend to teach some wisdom, which helps me a lot.

I sincerely hope you can learn them well.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：

本文是要求給對中國成語感興趣的外國筆友James寫封回信，像他介紹中國成語的信息。文章給出了提綱，成文時應(yīng)注意以下幾點：(1)內(nèi)容要點齊全，三方面內(nèi)容齊全：1.簡單介紹成語;2.學(xué)習(xí)成語的益處;3.分享自己學(xué)習(xí)成語的感受和體會。(2)人稱使用要恰當(dāng)。(3)時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時為主。(4)適當(dāng)使用一些連詞和插入語，使文章自然、流暢。(5)恰當(dāng)使用一些高級詞匯和句型，以增加文章的檔次。

【亮點說明】

1.使用高級句型：with的獨立結(jié)構(gòu)with many of Chinese idioms widely used in our daily life,；使用了賓語從句…making what you try to convey more convincing.；Not only放句首的部分倒裝以及非限制性定語從句Not only are they interesting, but also they tend to teach some wisdom, which helps me a lot.使用了過渡詞語：Firstly，Secondly，As far as I am concerned等。3.使用了重要短語：consist of由…組成；appeal to吸引；contribute to有助于，促成，投稿。