Question

1．假定你是李華，你所喜愛的Global Mirror周報創(chuàng)刊五周年之際征集讀者意見．請你依據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給主編寫封信，內(nèi)容主要包括：
1．說明你是該報的忠實讀者  
2．贊賞該報優(yōu)點：1）兼顧國內(nèi)外新聞   2）介紹名人成功故事
3．提出建議：刊登指導(dǎo)英語學(xué)習(xí)的文章  
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語已為你寫好；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
 Dear EditorinChief，
Congratulations on the 5^th anniversary of Global Mirror!
                                                                                      Sincerely yours．
 Li Hua 

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
First，it covers both national and international news，so that I can learn all important things that have happened during the week．首先，它的內(nèi)容涵蓋國內(nèi)國外的新聞，那樣的話我可以知道這一周內(nèi)發(fā)生的重要的事情．
高分句型二：
Second，equally attractive are the success stories of world famous people，which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place．
其次，同樣吸引人的還有各地名人的故事，那些故事可以幫我更好的理解人們是如何努力的讓這個世界變得更好．
高分句型一 so that I can learn all important things that have happened during the week．該句是一個由so that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句
高分句型二 which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place．該句是一個由which作關(guān)系代詞，且在從句中充當(dāng)主語的非限制性定語從句．

解答 Dear Editor in Chief，
   Congratulations on the 5^th anniversary of Global Mirror!
   I'm a regular reader of your newspaper．I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons．First，it covers both national and international news，so that I can learn all important things that have happened during the week．（高分句型）Second，equally attractive are the success stories of world famous people，which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place．（高分句型）（說明原因）
   As a young student，I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning，and I hope that it will become even more popular．（給出建議）

點評 該書面表達(dá)為提綱類，該類作文規(guī)定了考生表述的思路，因此寫作時應(yīng)注意要表達(dá)要點明確，用詞簡潔．