Question

【題目】假定你是李華，收到好友王林的電子郵件，說他在英語學(xué)習(xí)上用功不少，但是效果不好，他想放棄英語學(xué)習(xí)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容回復(fù)王林，勸他不要放棄英語學(xué)習(xí)。

1. 要對(duì)自己有信心（have confidence in）；

2. 與英語學(xué)習(xí)好的同學(xué)交朋友；

3. 進(jìn)步時(shí)獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)自己。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Wang Lin,

I am sorry to learn that you don’t do well in English.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Wang Lin,

I’m sorry to learn that you don’t do well in English. I’d like to give you my advice on learning English.

First of all, you should have confidence in yourself, which is very important to English learning. Secondly, you’d better make friends with the students who are good at English and they are very likely to help you. Thirdly, learning English well is a long process. Remember: reward yourself when you have made progress, which will inspire you greatly. Anyway, you mustn’t give up learning English. Believe in yourself. Where there’s a will, there’s a way.

Hope my suggestions will work.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】【試題分析】

本文針對(duì)收信人王林學(xué)習(xí)英語方面的困惑這個(gè)話題提出建議和忠告。第一段首先提出建議的原因引入建議，第二段建議的具體內(nèi)容。第三段寫客氣話。首尾呼應(yīng)。注意時(shí)態(tài)常用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。寫作時(shí)注意適當(dāng)?shù)卦黾蛹?xì)節(jié)，恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂眠B接過渡詞，以使行文連貫。另外，要注意時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運(yùn)用。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】

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