Question

目前，家長開車接送孩子上下學(xué)已成為一個普遍現(xiàn)象，人們對此做法褒貶不一。下面是就此現(xiàn)象所做的問卷調(diào)查結(jié)果。

請根據(jù)下列圖表提示，描述被訪者的看法，并就此現(xiàn)象發(fā)表自己的觀點。

注意：1.詞數(shù)150左右，文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入詞數(shù)。

          3.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Nowadays it’s a common practice for parents to drive their children to and from school. This causes a heated debate in the society. A survey on it has just been conducted on this debate. The results are as follows.

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Nowadays it’s a common practice for parents to drive their children to and from school. This causes a heated debate in the society. A survey on it has just been conducted on this debate. The results are as follows.

Of the people who support driving to school, about half believe that driving children to school saves time, so the children can get up later. Another 30% think it comfortable to go by car, especially in bad weather. About 15% consider it reasonable just for the sake of children’s safety. Still others think it is a great time for parents to communicate with their children.

However, other people are against driving children to school. About 55% of them believe that it results in heavier traffic, especially around school areas. Around 30% think that driving kids to and from school will add to pressure on parents. It takes time, expense and effort to do this. Still again, 15% worry that children may become more dependent on their parents in the long term.

I think going to school by car is a better solution for young children. However, for older children it is unnecessary.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是看圖作文中的柱狀圖和餅圖，看圖作文對考生的要求較高，首先要看懂圖形，根據(jù)圖形的數(shù)據(jù)篩選出要點。再組織語言把要點翻譯成英文。本文的要點已經(jīng)又算體現(xiàn)，實際上也算是正反觀點類議論文，在發(fā)表對應(yīng)觀點的時候要使用連接詞來連接各要點，使之成為一個整體。同時要變換使用高級句式，讓文章顯得不那么的單調(diào)。

考點：考查圖表類作文的寫作

點評：圖表類作文對考生的要求較高，首先要看懂圖形，篩選出要點。本文的關(guān)鍵在于議論觀點的表達方式要合理，要用連接詞使之成為整體，高級詞匯和句型的運用要適當(dāng)。