【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下短文。短文中共有10處錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Dear Mr. Yang,

I am writing to let you know that I needed your help with my English writhing. Which is known to all, grammar plays a very vital part in the writing. But I feel that I have some problems of my grammar. I am afraid that I am not able to identify my specifically errors. I would be grateful if you could point out and correct your mistakes. What is more, I used to the Chinese way of thinking, which stops me organize my writing in a proper way. I am wondering that you could also help me improve the structures of my writing.

I am looking forward to making great progresses under your instruction. Thanks are extended to you in advance!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【答案】

【解析】本文是一篇書信,主要講述了學(xué)生李華由于英文寫作能力不好,給楊老師寫信希望能得到老師的指導(dǎo),幫助自己提高語法、構(gòu)建寫作的思維框架。

考查動詞時態(tài)。“I am writing to let you know that I needed your help”,根據(jù)前句的 am writing為現(xiàn)在進行時,可知此句的時態(tài)應(yīng)該確定為一般現(xiàn)在時,而后句的needed為過去時,與前句時態(tài)不符。故將needed改為need。

考查固定句式。“Which is known to all”,as is known to all/us 眾所周知,為固定句式,故將which改為as。

考查冠詞。“grammar plays a very vital part in the writing”,此處的寫作指的是寫作這一類型,表示的是泛指,并不是特指某一寫作,故將the刪掉。

考查介詞。“I have some problems of my grammar”,have problem with… 有問題。故將of改為with。

考查形容詞。“I am not able to identify my specifically errors”,分析句子結(jié)構(gòu),errors為名詞,前面應(yīng)該用形容詞修飾名詞,故將specifically改為specific。

考查物主代詞。“I would be grateful if you could point out and correct your mistakes”,correct point out都是由前句的主語you發(fā)出的,賓語是mistakes,結(jié)合本文是老師對我進行指導(dǎo)。故將your改為my。

考查形容詞。“I used to the Chinese way of thinking”中西方文化存在差異,在語言的表述上也是,按照西方習(xí)慣,此句應(yīng)該是,我特定的習(xí)慣于中國人的思維方式。故添加specific。

考查動詞。“stops me organize my writing in a proper way”,stop sb doing sth. 讓某人停止做某事,為固定句式,故將organize改為organizing。

考查連接詞。“I am wondering that you could also help me improve the structures of my writing”,根據(jù)作者的思路,此句應(yīng)該是在征求對方的意見,故將that改為ifwhether。

考查名詞。“ making great progresses”,progress作為名詞進步時,為不可數(shù)名詞,故將progresses改為progress。

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