Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你校將舉辦以“追夢70年”為主題的慶祝建國70周年成就攝影展。你受學(xué)生會委托為校宣傳欄“留學(xué)中心”寫一則英文通知，向在校留學(xué)生征集部分?jǐn)z影作品。內(nèi)容包括：

1. 活動目的；

2. 作品內(nèi)容和要求；

3. 作品提交時(shí)間和方式。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】 Notice

To celebrate the 70th anniversary of the founding of PRC and arouse students’ patriotism and foster national pride, an exhibition on China’s achievements, which is themed Chinese Dream Pursuing over the last 70 Years, will be held in our school. Anyone who is interested is welcome to contribute their works to it.

The exhibition welcomes submissions representing the great achievements China has made in the past 7 decades, including high-tech, great events, transportation, new vehicles of communication, great changes in people’s daily life and so forth. Every photo submitted should be accompanied with a brief introduction and what deserves attention is that photo edited with Photoshop or any other software will not be accepted. Besides, every participant is expected to turn in three photos at most to Xinhua@gmail.com. Please bear in mind that the deadline for entries is September 30th, 2019.

Such a great chance is it to show your talent for photography and gain an insight into the brilliant success of China that all photography lovers can not afford to miss it. Looking forward lo your active participation.

The students’ Union

September 28th, 2019

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)是應(yīng)用文，要求寫一則通知。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本文要求寫一則通知：假定你是李華，你校將舉辦以“追夢70年”為主題的慶祝建國70周年成就攝影展。你受學(xué)生會委托為校宣傳欄“留學(xué)中心”寫一則英文通知，向在校留學(xué)生征集部分?jǐn)z影作品。內(nèi)容包括：1. 活動目的；2. 作品內(nèi)容和要求；

3. 作品提交時(shí)間和方式。時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如；photographic exhibition（攝影展），anniversary（周年），celebrate（慶祝），founding（成立），Chinese Dream Pursuing over the last 70 Years（追夢70年）， patriotism（愛國精神），submission（提交）及achievement（成就）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持卷面的整潔美觀。